Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

Ugghhhhhh

there ain’t gonna be no way for me to finish writing my story in time 😭

@savannah_grace2009

AHHH YESSSS MARKY BOYYYY ( @esther-c your nickname stuck lol, no going back now!!! hahaha)

This makes me so happy 🤭🤣

Oh my word, reading through everyone’s comments…. aghhhh!!! I need to seriously start reading it, I’ve just been so busyyy 😭

@the_lost-journal

Wow! Sounds creepy. I do not know much about the fallen…

@the_lost-journal

Sounds interesting! What kind of virus has taken over the world?

How is PICAFE connected to TKOK?

@savannah_grace2009

Okay, well, I am reading! *Shoves all the motivation your way* I will give you some comments and some in-depth thoughts! Hopefully these are what you’re looking for.

Comments (as I’m going through) –

– Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.

– Prose flows smoothly…[Read more]

@keilah-h

It’s in the update on her profile. 🙃

@ellette-giselle sounded like it!

I recognized “ace” from an Australian book series about dogs; the main dog character calls his mate that once or twice when he’s talking about her, implying that she’s the very best. It stands to reason that’d be a British thing too, and it certainly sounds like somethin that’d come out of the WWI time period.

@the_lost-journal

I knew you would say that 😂

What can I say? You know me.

There should be more people named CARROT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maybe look up words meaning carrot in various languages, that might work.

Where exactly is the link again? I seem to remember it was on an external document or something rather than being posted directly on KP.

@ellette-giselle haha!!

Not as familiar with that one, and google search brought up nothing, but I’m guessing it means that’s good.

@savannah_grace2009 yay!

@savannah_grace2009 yep!

Got any more of your story yet?

I haven’t been checking, sorry.

@ellette-giselle I love it. You can use British and Aussie expressions around me whenever you want!

@savannah_grace2009 yeahh!! it’s always great to have that sense of community.

@whalekeeper lol

@ellette-giselle I’m glad.

And I’m over here wondering if your cry of “crikey!” was just the first thing that came to mind or if you specifically chose it cause you thought I’d get a kick out of it.

If the second is the case, your presumption was correct.

If it’s the first and I’m over thinking it, ignore that.

@savannah_grace2009

I also just want to know that people are reading it, because it’s hard to write when you don’t know if people even care or are interested, if that makes sense. When I know people are reading it, it gives me so much more motivation!!

yessss this happens to me too. The I worked on for over half of 2024 and was the first fan…[Read more]

@rae awww! Baron trying to play with the girls was so cute!!

also I agree with Ellette’s suggestion.

@keilah-h

Hmm, I will remember to choose a fork for a weapon next time someone throws me into a tournament.

@koshka

All people are weird in their own way, some more dramatically than others. It’s the “normal” ones that usually scare me.

Those are the kinds of people who are average and forgettable enough to be spies, you see.

@loopylin

Why thank you. Glad to be your local online conundrum ✨

<3

@ellette-giselle

Loopy never seemed weird to me.

Oh she’s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper lollllll

I think I’m the oddest one out of my real life friend group, although I do have a friend who knows several ways to kill someone with a fork.