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Active 1 month ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
To be honest, it doesn’t really matter either way. I was just surprised at that sentence in the book because I’d never thought of it that way before. You might throw other believers off too, or maybe I’m the only one… I don’t see it as a big problem.
Yeah 😆 I should probably change it. It just looks so cozy in there. . . *meanw…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Yeah, it makes sense. It’s just interesting. If God sacrificed animals in place of Adam and Eve so they didn’t have to die, why wouldn’t the Bible just say that? All it says in Genesis is that he clothed them with skins.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Sorry I dropped off the face of the earth for a day. It was super busy.
Okay, sounds cool! And yeah, kind of creepy too 😂 Carrot Cake sounds like a character. I like how you came up with the different races and how they become empowered when they fall.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Really, lol. Hmm… I feel like other people do, too, but I’m not sure because I haven’t read too many people’s writing. But you’re right, most of us don’t for the most part.
Also, random question. What made you choose the name Kefa? (You don’t have to answer if you don’t want to.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Don’t worry, Julian is having all the same questions as you most likely are.
I can tell 😂
Interesting. I didn’t know animals were killed in Adam and Eve’s place, even though I knew about sacrifices later. Where is it referenced as the first sacrifice?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Yayy!! It sounds interesting—a little creepy, perhaps, but I’m intrigued!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I’m so sorry I didn’t get back to you yesterday! It was such a chaotic day and I didn’t get home until 8 pm.
I really like the way you handled their conversion through the journal entries! It was cool. Leon was a gladiator?? 😅
God slew two animals in [Adam’s and Eve’s] place.
Um, when was this?
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Woah woah woah *Stumbles back* Thank you!! 😆<3 I’ll post more very soon! In the art chat of course; I don’t want to spam this topic.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@savannah_grace2009 I’ve been catching up!
Very good so far, although this confused me a bit:
“Passing through Azer land,” the woman swung the tip of the flames towards them. Livia inhaled sharply as the heat collided with the moisture on her cheek, sizzling and popping loudly. “Drinking from Azer waters.”
I mean I understand they have to have s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Maybe I should give you the fanfic I wrote for these guys, since I dump stuff about them on you all the time. Sorry for that.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@whalekeeper aww cute! I like the style.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
He’s just admiring his birdie, no thoughts of world domination or unethical experiments today 😊 lol
*Snorts* That’s pretty funny, I like it
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whaley replied to the topic Thoughts: Art, Illustrating, &c. in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
*Subscribes* I’m not very professional, but I like hobby art and this will be an interesting topic. 😁
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Yaayyy I’m glad that’s what you needed!! Awesome! <3 I was so worried for a second that it wasn’t.
you’re gonna make me cryyyy
Aw, don’t cry, I like critiquing and I thought it was a fun way to spend my time. :]
I’ll think about the things you mentioned and are struggling with, and if there’s something you need to brainstorm…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I soooo need to custom my brushes, because either the pencil has inconsistent pressure or it’s just me. But that’s a ramble for the art chat.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Doodles my character and her mum because I felt like it, lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 2 weeks, 4 days ago
(Heavy voice)
maybe…. *sniff*….maybe.
no joke I actually have a stuffy nose today so yeah that sniffle is real -
Keilah H. replied to the topic The potato army WIP. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@the_lost-journal your stories sound AMAZING!
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