Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@ellette-giselle

Alec is halfway across the world, Ellette. Actually they’re not even on the same planet, right? You can’t seriously believe that you’re holding him against the wall right now. That’s just some poor civilian, or maybe one of the bad guys, (in which case you can keep him there.)

Just put the gun down, and no one’s going to get hur…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

This calls for a new squad! Not the protection squad, because if I did that you would try to steal my characters.

The CHARACTER WITNESS PROTECTION!!!

*promptly rescues Leon and Rolf, gives them new identities so they can hide from you and they disappear into the city*

@ellette-giselle

Goodbye Leon and Rolf.

😳😳

@godlyfantasy12

Yay, Godly! So glad you’re back! 😁

@ellette-giselle

Yikes. This is not looking good.

So Hassan paid the soldiers to look the other way?

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That escalated quickly!

Seems like things are about to get rough for Leon and Rolf… 🥺

Why wouldn’t the slave trader just kill them instead of tying them up and everything?

@ellette-giselle

Uh oh, it doesn’t look like it’s working again. But yay, thanks! I’ll check it out!

@ellette-giselle ikr??

@ellette-giselle

Oh don’t worry. Things will be bad.

It’s crazy how this kind of sentence excites us.

Writers are nuts.

@theshadow thanks!

currently debating whether I should do some of my other ones today.

@godlyfantasy12 Go for it!!

@ellette-giselle wow, not even at the town yet and they’ve already gotten into a tangle!

I agree with Linus, drawing this out rather than having them immediately get rescued or escape or something makes it more interesting.

@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!

@freed_and_redeemed oooh! I like it so far! If you write any more please post it.

@theshadow

Okay, good. Eh, it’s just part of his personality to me. He’s great at Warrain and leading the team, because he applies himself, and as a result doesn’t really focus on school. 😆 His skills with computers and coding will be more prominent later.

Yep! Though Sara and Cole will still carry most of the story. I believe Alec’s next ch…[Read more]

*Subscribes* I’ll comment more on this later, but I need to sleep.

I don’t want to skip Barnes’ class, or her own exhaustion will be all for naught.

@koshka @raxforge @loopylin

Sorry guys, this is all on me. I’ll try to move the scene forward after a good sleep. (It’s night here.) I’ve been sick for a while and it takes a long time for my sleep cycle to recover, so I’m always tired. O⁠_⁠o

@godlyfantasy12 heyyyy welcome back!!! Glad you’re back to writing your story. I don’t exactly have the time to give feedback yet, but I will TOTALLY be back tomorrow.

@theshadow

Is he meant to be really smart, but doesn’t necessarily care about school?

You nailed it! Is that enough description, or do you want me to try to elaborate? 😜 And don’t worry, you’re good.

Awesome, thank you! Yeah, Alec is one of my favorites. 🥰

By the way, are you planning to post a new chapter of your WIP soon? I’m looking forward…[Read more]