Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@grcr

only thing is I don’t think I’d be allowed back on Discord because we had a… scary predatory… moment happen on there… so I don’t know… I’d have to ask… 🙂

hmmm this might’ve been why I was avoiding it come to think of it…..

I’ve never had an experience like that but I’ve heard of this kinda thing.

@koshka

I just got the cabbage stuck on the stove so we can eat in a few minutes.

*Snorts* XD

@godlyfantasy12

I’ll hang around here for a bit, mainly to think up a new TotW (Topic of the Week). I have a few other things to work on, like researching synth music, the earth’s atmosphere, etc. all for my projects. I’m waaay to concerned with…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ohhh I get that 😂

Right now it’s a little easier “writing” since most of it is editing and moving scenes and such since this is a second draft, but *shrug* sometimes I just don’t have that inspiration, ya know?

Oh wait! You haven’t heard about this WIP yet!!

Ok I’m dropping the moodboards, hang tight.

@godlyfantasy12

She’s g o n e *cue dramatic spooky music*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just not forever 🤪 Or maybe she’s actually writing like I should be doing &#x1f…

@grcr

i’ve got your nose.

🫢

THAT’s where it went 👀

OK I”M BACK

I was over here like, “I’m here!” And then I got called to dinner 😑😂

I’d be open to creating our own community. Slack would probably work for me, I’d have to check with my parents about Discord since I don’t have it yet. There’s also Group Me… which I don’t know much about, but plenty of youth groups seem to use it for announcements (not sure if you can create mini channels or anything like that.)

@godlyfantasy12

I ammmm

but idk for how much longer, lol

@koshka ooooh that’s a great story. You said it’s from your sister’s book?

 

that kind of tale is always fun.

@the_lost-journal you’re good!

@esther-c ohhhh ok.

 

yeah idk if we’d like that, especially with roleplays and stuff.

 

I don’t even remember my reason for avoiding Discord so I might as well try it out if it comes to that.

@loopylin @keilah-h
I’ve never used Discord, but I’m open to it!! I wasn’t aware you could have separate channels and such.

Keilah, Slack is mostly used for businesses, but I’ve also been a part of a writing camp that uses it and it works pretty well. The only problem is that if we use the free version, the message history is only 90 days.

@ellette-giselle

Yep! I noticed that! 😆 “Teacher.” I like it.

@ellette-giselle

I love the way you put us inside Rolf’s story instead of having him just tell it. It worked so much better. Also, the transitions were great.

Good section. The part about Conrad was sad, though. I don’t really have any big critiques. Great job!

@the_lost-journal aww cute!

 

It’s spelling “quacking” not “quaking” but that’s all right.

 

 

 

@esther-c @loopylin I’ve avoided Discord for as long as possible (I don’t even remember the reason why) but everyone keeps bringing up reasons that I should have it lol. Never heard of Slack.

@theshadow lolllllll

 

that’s gonna be weird

@theshadow

It looks good! I don’t have any major critiques. It is a very short chapter, but it does a good job of building on the tension. Also, I like the way you described the trees.

It seems a little weird that Olivia and Adeline and Dylan don’t seem to care about their families… well, maybe Dylan a little bit.