KydonAndWillow

Okey-dokey. I’ll make the changes asap. I’m going to send you a separate feet test, and then I’ll rework them on him.

lol, no problem. I totally get it. 😅

I don’t think I forgot anything… did I?

@keilah-h

Okay, here it is…

If there’s anything you don’t like, let me know—I can change things. 😁😁

I’m sorry about how sniper’s hat and feet turned out.

@keilah-h

Of course—I don’t mind at all!! Once I send it to you (and you like it), it’s yours to do whatever you want with! 😁

It’s actually done. I’ll post it in a couple minutes….

Now that I’m going back to the beginning…

This is really hard XD

because I know you’re trying to go for the “chaos” vibes of a big family as they get ready for church and the party. You set up Hallie, Easton, and the parents pretty well, especially for the fast-paced scene, but the other siblings kind of disappear throughout the book.

Maybe…[Read more]

@esther-c

To be honest, I’m not really sure.

I might have to reread it a little more and let you know XD

@loopylin

Their story is inspired by Chinese fantasy… so… ancient China… mixed with elements of, like, Japan and Korea… and my own crazy fascinations. Something like that. XD

Ahh ok. Yeah, like if he were cornered.

@keilah-h

Alrighty! That’s perfect. I should be done with it soon. 😀

@savannah_grace2009

Ok thank you!!

I was thinking there needed to be more family interaction too. I’m glad you caught that. Is there a certain spot on the book that you think those types of scenes would fit best? (If not, that’s fine)

Ok yes!! I will for sure do that! It will be fun for me to take time to flesh out the characters individually…[Read more]

@esther-c

I would just like to see it set up a little more at the very beginning chapters.

I know you’re going for chaos on the Sunday morning before church, but like I mentioned before, since Easton and Hallie’s family is a big one, I think you need to focus more on their family and the dynamics. I’d love to see Hallie’s closeness with her mom…[Read more]

@grcr @savannah_grace2009

Thank you girls so much for reading through my book and supporting me!! 💕💕 I so so so appreciate you! ❤️

Your comments have given me a lot more confidence in the plot and characters, which I definitely needed going into a third draft.

Are there any scenes you’d like to see added? Or characters you’d like to see mor…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! you’re the best and I always love exchanging ideas with you <3

I LOVE LITTLE HALLIE

@esther-c

yeah, Cars and Phones BROKE ME

Last week my mom was at Mayo Clinic in Rochester doing more cancer treatments, which was hard since it wasn’t planned. I guess even if it was, it would be hard since she was gone for over a week and me and my siblings and my dad were all missing her a lot and attempting to keep our house from going out of…[Read more]

I actually have a question too, but I’ll ask it later. 😁 I think I might have forgot what it was anyway… oh boy.

Ah, meant to answer this yesterday. For some characters I created recently enough… (haven’t told any of you about them yet, but I really love them right now.). I don’t have any direct examples of their fear response at the moment, though. 🤨

For Simon, his primary response would be flight. He never puts himself in a place to be attacked or…[Read more]

I fell behind quite a bit, but I finally caught up. Whoops.

@esther-c

GIRL.

This broke me.

I figured Tyler was going to pass away, but I wasn’t expecting it to be so sad and encouraging at the same time. It was really good. Really powerful. His letter… ah, it sure struck a chord. Katrina’s situation was an amazing plot twist—I wasn’t sure what…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ah, perfect! 😄 Yeah, I’ll draw Sniper too if you want. Up to you.

Once you’re done with that one, I have a completely different pair of characters I would love to see in your style too, but if someone else wants their character drawn I’ll let them have a turn first. Or if you decide you need a break, that’s fine too.

Sounds good!

@keilah-h

Howdy! I’m ready to draw one of your characters now!! Just fill in the info on the questions from the first page whenever you’re ready. 😁