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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
don’t be afraid to keep it though! I liked it!
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Honestly…
I have an idea….
ignore that first chapter lol
I HAVE A PLAN *maniacal laughter*
WHY DO I CHANGE IT SO MUCHHHH lol
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
Love it! 🥰
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m not 100% sure either 🤣
Ok that makes sense! 😉 Yeah, I could always take a snippet of it and write it how I would interpret a four year old thinking through that if you wanted an example. (i don’t know if that’s weird or not 😂)
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago

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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago

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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
@peoplessss
Sharing the three moodboards from my current WIP! (First is the book moodboard, then Clayton, then Audrey)

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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I don’t know how a four year old thinks hahaha
honestly I had really deep thoughts for a little kid and I have always thought really complex, so it seems realistic to me XDXD
I will work on it!!!
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
Ok….Werner looks like he’d be a favorite character of mine… 🤭 Lmk if you post any snippets of him!!
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Oooh, I like it!! My only critique is the first half of the chapter…. It was great until I found out Sef was only 4 at this point. It just felt a little too complex to be coming from a 4 year old, ya know? Maybe simplify it somehow? Keep the same emotions that Sef is feeling, but see if you can bring it down to a 4 year o…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Why thank you 😎
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Esther replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 8 months ago
🫡
😁
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
Ooohhhh, interesting….👀
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Esther replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 8 months ago
This looks interesting! I can’t promise I’ll be able to keep up, but I might just stalk the topic. We’ll see!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@anyone-who-is-interested
Chapter 1
Strong hands grabbed at her shoulders, trying to rip her away.
But Sef wouldn’t let go.
Eyes scrunched shut, tears leaking from the corners, she clung to her father like he was the only thing keeping her life together.
In a way, he was.
And now he was leaving.
“Let go, Sef,” her mother said stern…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Crystalized was pretty bad, but I don’t think Dragons Rising is very good, either. I could rant about it, but I’m not going to because nobody wants that :p
I’ll just say the thing that bothers me the most about it is the way they’re trampling over all the lore they’ve already established. The stuff they’re introducing just…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
There are a lot of teens/adults who still follow the show from their childhood.
Yeah, that’s pretty much why I still watch it. Nostalgia, plus to cringe at the recent seasons :p
But maybe we should take this conversation elsewhere before Ducktator kicks us off.
Lol perhaps.
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HighScribe replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh, yes, my brothers and I, we got so. many. Ninjago. LEGOs.
But we took them all apart now for pieces (and because you literally couldn’t walk on our basement flood) so we have, like, fifty ninja heads lying around. Lol.
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