KydonAndWillow

@freedomwriter76

Aww, well, you like it, and that’s the most important thing!!!! 😃😁❤️😊

Definitely! 😊

If the pen is mightier than the sword, why do actions speak louder than words?

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks! 🙂

@kyronthearcanin

Of course, sorry if I come off as a know it all when I point anything out. My own worldbuilding is also very incomplete, and I agree on the list thing. Maybe I should start posting some chapters of my WIP sometime, though it gets a little creepy at parts, but it would be nice to have a nice set of critiques as well.

@kyronthearcanin

That’s true, but side would be very hard for them to keep balanced, unless they were double sided, or just super small. Then once again, there’s the neck issue. If they never developed much for military, living in peace with one another as well as with the other races, then it would make sense that they don’t really develop their…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, I suppose that makes a little more sense for the Felisaro, though even with that, this is going to be a major hindrance to their development as a race in comparison to the others as @keilah-h mentioned, but there is a lot of interesting dynamics you could get into with that if you wanted. Using short range weapons still seems…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, that would make for some interesting history! Btw, @kyronthearcanin , do the Arcanin also use their mouths, or do they use some other method, like their magic?

@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just brainstorming, I guess.

Yep XD

Would anyone like some fresh questions to ponder?

Who has tasted protons before?

What do protons taste like?

When did you taste said protons?

Where did you taste said protons?

Why did you taste said protons?

How did you taste said protons?

@keilah-h

Right, yeah that would make sense, but don’t the Arcanin also walk on all fours? As their known as the kind you don’t want to recon with, being seen as by far the most powerful of all of them?

@keilah-h @kyronthearcanin

Thanks! The issue with that though is it seems already pretty well established that the Felisaro somehow get around this, and are quite advanced. Unless they did take longer to advance, or maybe even piggy backed of from some of the others, but even that would come with a wide set of difficulties, going back again to…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Ok, I’m so sorry for not responding to this after so long, I just now was able to get around to reading it. It’s really good! I like the cast of characters you got going, and you really seem to be building up on the idea of whether or not Quelin is friend or foe, is that going to turn into a major theme or arc?

A few…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, just wait!!!! ❤️ (lol, you would be correct! XD)

Ok good! They need love and truth!! 😊

Lol…oh no…😂 Poor Ev and Ami and everyone else!!!! 😅😥😯😟

Yeah… lol XD. This is the second draft and it’s ending up pretty different from the first draft. (Same plot points, different means of getting there, if that makes sense.) I really…[Read more]

@joy-calle

So, I don’t know what advice I’ll be able to offer, since I’m editing my first novel. XD (I know I’ve been writing for a couple of years, but I rarely ever finished writing a book. 😂)

Anyway, I’ll echo what some of the others have said. If you need to, take a break. For as long as you need. Sometimes, when I don’t write for a littl…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aww, that’s great! 😀 No one in my family loves history as much as me..😭 Except maybe for 1 of my aunts…she likes history. 🙂

At least you have a family member who does. 😊

Ah, wellllll….haven’t written much for them lately since I’m kinda out of ideas/motivation, but they’re doing…uhm…y…

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@joy-calle

😂 I love that ship name

Thanks! XD (That reminds me… I need to throw in another couple on this game show… 😏)

Ooh, that is so cool! I’ve done it for Eliza and Kimbel too, and Eliza is ISFJ-T while Kimbel is ISTJ-A. That’s why their relationship dynamic is so cute cause she’s veryyy emotional and he’s super logical but his softness fo…

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@freedomwriter76

Yesssss, history is so interesting!!!!! I’m so glad to hear I’m not the only one who loves History, lol, sometimes it seems as though I’m weird and the only one who does XDXDXD

😂 lol. You’re definitely not the only one. My dad and my brother also really like history so it’s fun to discuss it with them. 🙂

Speaking of World War…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

LITTLE ARA AND NOVEMBER ARE ADORABLE!!! 😍🥰

@sarafini

I’ve loved writing for as long as I can remember! 😀 I think I was 10 when I attempted to write a book. (It was bad… Like, the chapters were half a page long. XD) I started a lot of other projects. I always puzzled how an author could write such long books. 😂 Anyway, when I di…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Don’t mind me falling off the face of the planet for a little bit. 😜 (I had some stuff to do) Either way… I’m back! XD

Yeah…Ancient History is not my forte, but it’s not too bad, lol XD I really love seeing how a lot of Biblical prophecy (like the destruction of certain cities) has come true and is supported by archeolog…

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@freedomwriter76

I just learned about the “Question-Begging Epithet” fallacy in Logic, which was really interesting!!! That’s the biggest thing I’ve found interesting, lol! XD

Sounds interesting!! 😀

And just learning about different Pharoahs and stuff in History. 🙂

Cool!! I love ancient history. It’s second to modern history. Pretty much from…[Read more]

@joy-calle

I took the test for my MCs! (Which are in this game show, actually!)

Everton got ESTP-T. Which is definitely accurate! XD

Amidala got ISFJ-T. That’s pretty accurate too!

I took it for myself too. They say I’m an ENFJ-A. Which is sort of accurate. Sometimes some of those change depending on the circumstances or my mood. 😜