KydonAndWillow

@trailblazer

Got it! I’d just never heard it before, but it makes sense.

@jonas

Hmmm, that’s hard, because you can tell it’s a bit derivative from a lot of preexisting ideas. To change that would be to radically change the system as a whole, which is fine, just annoying, but often necessary.

One issue I immediately have is with the name and the first element. If it is called “essence burning” does that not show an…[Read more]

@sarafini

One thing I noticed was that it was really hard to tell that it was a dream. If you weren’t looking close enough, you would have missed it. So since it’s a dream, you might want to make it more obvious. But I liked your story! It was good!

@thearcaneaxiom

I like your idea of that the magic words are evil because of the purpose given by the Pythonos. So I might use that? I’m still not sure, haha!

Names of people:

Ottoline, Marcurious, Sparrow, Rishona, Berko, Sef, Lilitu, Azazel, Indie, Jordan (I need a new name for him, an evil one, so if you could help that would be great!),…[Read more]

@trailblazer

“I’ll just be thankful when I can sleep in a bed again and have a roof over my head,” Etta whispered back. I mentally chided myself for longing for something so vain when even the most

practical needs still weren’t met. Etta had a wisdom I lacked. What did it matter if we were a little dirty and dusty? No one else in our party m…

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@esther-c

I’m so excited, lol!

@esther-c

Ok, sounds good! 🙃

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @freedomwriter76

If nobody does it before me, I’ll write the first RP either tomorrow or Friday. 🙂 (tomorrow’s gonna be busy, so I may not get to it. 😉 )

@freedomwriter76

Woo-hoo!!!! Congratulations!!!!! 💖🥳

@savannah_grace2009

Even though she’s beautiful she thinks that she’s ugly because that’s what she’s been told all her life.

If she ever says something self-derogatory in front of Amir, he’s going to be so shocked. 😂 And seeing her sort of red hair is going to surprise him (and @mineralizedwritings Kaine’s hair) since in his country red hair is…[Read more]

@grcr

Who wants to start? I’ve never done this before, so anyone more experienced want to start?

@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @esther-c @mineralizedwriting @trailblazer @freedomwriter76

Soo…. When do we begin?

savannah_grace2009

The language would be not their main language, but most would grow up bilingual. Most speak only English but some do speak Erstonian (the other universal language), so like I said they would learn both languages. I’m not sure where the magic words come from/what gave them power, but they are only used by the Pythonos when they c…

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@thearcaneaxiom

what do you mean by a list of names and consonants?

Do you mean names of characters?

@grcr

Thank you! Yes, I do like the name and it seemed to fit her character! That’s funny that you have a sister named Neveah! haha

@thearcaneaxiom

Interesting, so in that case, what would have allowed a universal language to come about? A grand unification? Maybe just a tongue similar to what is happing with English that simply became more…

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@savannah_grace2009

Hey there!

I know this is kinda late, but I’ve read the prologue and the first five chapters. It’s really interesting so far, and I’m pretty excited to keep reading as you share more!

(BTW, Do you like the name Nevaeh? I have a sister with that name, so that was kinda funny to see. lol)

@freedomwriter76

Ooo! If there’s on thing I love, it’s a funny character! lol 😃