KydonAndWillow

@jonas

It’s fine, your’s was better. “split personalities????” where do I get this stuff XD

@jonas

I know. I was only mostly joking.

I think @acancello needs to make Hugo talk to Ottoline, and @rae might need to do a transition scene? Idk.

…having split personalities…

The Diffi Cult is ruled in the most difficult manner possible, by…

being a democracy and monarchy at the same time. They accomplish this by…

@jonas

Same…I would write one…but I kind of have to know what I’m talking about to write one, lol

I’m bored. WE NEED MORE CHAOS!!!!!!

@jonas

Sorry I couldn’t help more! Plotting is just really new to me….so it’s hard to give good advice XD

…that everyone must stay ten miles away from them, or else…

@jonas

The website says that the Hook is the inciting incident (so maybe I plotted wrong, XD). Apparently the First Plot Point is the point of no return, where your character takes action and there’s no going back. It’s the first significant event of the story.

@jonas

…lazy. They are then…

Shunned in the most difficult way possible, meaning…

@acancello

I will!!! I love them so much <3

…their brains disintegrate with how easy it is and they become…

@jonas

Any member of the Diffi Cult found guilty of taking the easier and/or more straightforward path is subjected to…

picking up a ball, and putting it back down. The task is so easy that…

@jonas

Hmm. Good question. I’m not exactly sure how to explain it, partly because I don’t understand it that well. But from what I understand, the Hook is what grabs the reader’s attention. Like in my story, for example, the “hook” would be when Neveah gives birth to Hanna. It disrupts Sef’s natural world, however, it doesn’t really force her to…[Read more]

….in caves in the mountains, along the streets, anywhere that makes surviving as hard as possible…

@acancello

This is all I’ve written in the next chapter:

The next morning, Lilitu walked out of his room, wearing actual clothes this time.

He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw Sef sleeping on the couch. Then all the memories from last night came rushing back. Why was she here? What had happened? Where were his parents?

Sef’s green hair f…

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New Topic 

Introducing the Diffi Cult! The Cult of Diffi worships the god Diffi, who teaches that absolutely everything one does should be as difficult to do as possible. The god Diffi makes everything so hard for itself that it’s…

@jonas

Yeah, that could be interesting. The perception thing I still think if given to the right person with the right mental discipline, they could do a lot if there isn’t so much of a specific form of “power” you receive. Perhaps it could always be intellectual power, or influential power, ect. If that were the case though, if you could give up…[Read more]

@beth-torres

Idk, I guess KP is still being buggy.

@kathleenramm

I’ve noticed this as well.