KydonAndWillow

@rae

Yeah, I though some of your characters probably weren’t full human.

@jonas

What?

Oh yeah, I kinda forgot Svlys was here.

Svlys

“Fracture, do everyone around you a favor and shut up.” Svlys said irritably as she eyed the young man and the… whatever it was. “What are we?” She said to the stone thing, “We’re humans – at least, I’d assume we all are.” She glanced around at the group. “And all I want is to get out of this madh…[Read more]

I’ll introduce my charrie, but I’ll wait to actually RP for him, so the other characters have time to adjust and react to Igua and Izre showing up.

Klethen

Klethen is of average height and build. He has unruly dark brown hair which often obscures his face. A patch covers one eye, which is pure black (the whole eye, pupil, iris, and sclera). His…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Yeah, I did notice that. It always seemed kind of unnatural and kind of stilted to me. Would it make it better if I tied it into the fact that he’s an orphan? He kind of struggles with that, because he was abandoned and never knew his parents. He loves Azazel and Indie so so so much, but he feels like he’s not worthy to be treated…[Read more]

@ESTHER-C

NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOO! YOU CAN’T KILL AMIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs into my pillow for two hours*

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *takes deep breath* OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Anyway……

I do like the idea that he’s dying in place of Dabir. I think your idea that it could be part of the law that anyone can willingly take the…[Read more]

@calyhuge

probably shouldn’t have tagged whaley since she’s not active in this RP 😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️ pls nobdy kill me

lol!

Fracture

He was minding his own business, trying to stay awake. He was tired. He needed a nap. His eyelids felt heavy…why couldn’t these people just stop talking, get along, and let him-

“What are you? What do you want?” Fracture screamed a high pitched yelp as a voice growled in his ears, and jumped six inches in the air.

“We’re being…[Read more]

@esther-c

“So, uh, y-you like t-to eat?” Lukas asked. He kicked himself. That came out sounding much worse than it sounded in his head. He wished he could take it back, but could do nothing. So he stood there with a pained expression, waiting for Liv’s reply.

I’M DYING!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Livia

“So, uh, y-you like t-to eat?”

Liv stared blank…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, and names don’t have to be from the same language. A name that is noticeably foreign will be useful to say that the character is from a different context. If the character is from the same ethnic context, but has a foreign name, suggests a history with their parents, whatever that may be.

@esther-c

I do think that the “dying in place of” is a good idea. Maybe I haven’t read enough, but I think it’s more interesting for someone to give their life for someone else willingly, and not just in a protection way.

(basically, I agree with TheArcaneAxiom)

@esther-c

This is really up to you. I like the idea of the giving himself up thing instead of just being in the way though. It would cause a lot of emotional drive for Dabir later on. Not only because Amir saved him, but because he willfully took it upon himself.

Y’all, this article has so many good quotes!!!

Inspirational Writing Quotes From Famous Authors

@rae

This story is so sad! It’s really good though, well done! I don’t think we need to enforce the deadline. I would want ours to be judged in this case, because I went full comedy, and you were much more serious, so it’s not really possible to realistically compare them in a meaningful way. Thanks for the congrats though!

@rae @savannah_grace20…[Read more]

ChatGPT doesn’t work with making conlangs at all, I’ve made many heart felt attempts on helping it along.

@jonas

So I have a few questions about this. Is this all one language then, or is there room for diversification. I think that it can all be rationalized as cohesive, though I noticed not only Greek names, but also traces from languages like French. This is fine, just thought I’d mention it. If you want to pay a little more attention to the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Sorry I haven’t responded to this one until now. I think it’s good. All that I would mention is that the history tangent with the pythonos while only a paragraph or two, felt a little sudden. Lilitu is young, and while he may be thinking about these things, I think this part would flow much better if you made it much more of a…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom @rae @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @smiley @sorry-my-brain-broke @anyone-else

I need help.

I’m trying to choose an ending for my novel. I thought I had it figured out, but now I’m doubting it. Either way, someone is going to die, so read at your own risk.

First, her…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I feel like they’re going to be good friends from now on. I don’t know why.

I know! It’s awesome 😉

Ev doesn’t really have any guy friends in his storyworld…. I kinda feel bad for him. At least he has his brother(s). 😂

Ev

“We never knew any family besides, well, us,” Tech said, curling his tail around his legs. “I enjoy creating…[Read more]

@rae

Fynn

“I-it’s odd. I-I never have had something quite like it. I like it.”

Fynn smiled and gave Chase a friendly pat on the shoulder. “I knew you would.”

Chase tensed and pulled his shoulder away slightly. Fynn got the message and withdrew his hand. He grabbed a piece of pizza, chomping into it. “So this is your first time eating pizz…[Read more]