KydonAndWillow

@freed_and_redeemed

Of course girl!!! I’m literally sooo proud of you and so lucky to know you (even if it’s just on KP, girl you’re amazing!!!)

And I love you’re aesthetics, very aesthetic-y <3  XD XD

@freed_and_redeemed

YESSS girl Pinterest and Canva are the BEST!

Hey, do you want to follow me on pinterest? You can’t search up my account cuz it’s private, but here’s the link to follow me if you want!!!!!!

https://pin.it/6IwrARipo

@linus-smallprint

Would you mind looking at my novel? You don’t have to if your busy, but the more people critiquing it, the more it motivates me to write!!

@freed_and_redeemed

FREEDOMMMM

I’m so happy for you, that’s so cool!!!!!!!!!

@linus-smallprint

I read up until Chapter the Fifth!!!

You are an amazing writer, it’s really good, I feel like I’m reading a published book!!!!

I’ll read Chapter the Sixth as soon as I can get to it.

No, I don’t think Alan seems inconsistent from what I’ve read so far!

@ellette-giselle

I try to overlook mistakes and I’ve gotten a lot better, believe it or not! But I still can’t stand looking at my draft and seeing so much cringy writing!
Even when I build something out of wood…I still want the wood to look perfect lol

I’m just a perfectionist I guess *shrugs*

Great!!!!!!

@rae

Sef

“That’s so cool,” she said. “Can you-can you do me?” she wanted to know.

@ellette-giselle

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Gah… that’s not how it ends… right? RIGHT?! 😶😶

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I like how you wrote this part:

For some reason, though he knew what was going to happen, the whole situation didn’t seem real. In fact, after the initial horrified shock, Jonathan no longer felt the stabbing fear. He was numb physically and mentally. The more he t…

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@ellette-giselle

This is really good! I still don’t understand how you can write so fast…

Like I get that you have it all planned out…I have mine planned out too, exactly what I want to happen, but I still can’t write it that fast, I’m too much of a perfectionist and want everything to be exactly how I want XD

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@esther-c

Is @calyhuge gonna crash our scene? Or am I supposed to RP?

I’m lost sorry lol

@rae

I’m sorry, I’ve just been super lazy with my RP’ing lately XD XD

here you go! <3

Sef

“She’s pretty,” Sef smiled. “How can you get her picture in your eyes?” she asked, feeling dumb for asking, but the curiosity  wouldn’t recede.

@ellette-giselle

Thanks girl <3

@ellette-giselle

Thanks!

I’m just trying to be super careful that I’m still honoring God with my writing. And I’m also paranoid about my writing XD

@ellette-giselle

Haha you’re good!

But question–  do you think it’s too dark?

Huh I don’t know if you tagged me or not, I’ll look at it sometime today!!! 👍👍

@rae

And you can rip apart my writing too XD XD

@rae

In my opinion, just don’t think of him as a “hero” when he sacrifices himself. You can still keep him the same, just don’t think of him the same way.

Idk if this is making sense…

I tried lol

@theshadow

You’re good!!!! Haha thanks for wanting to read it!!!

@everyone

Thanks for reading this because it keeps me from slacking off when people are expecting new chapters XD

Chapter 13

Decay

“Sssef! I’m not paying you to ssstand there doing nothing,” the Pythonos’s voice carried, snapping her back to attention.

“Yes sir,” she lowered her head, her cheeks flushing with embarrassment as her fellow workers all looked up from their work.

Shaking her head to clear her thoughts, she turned back to the pile of trash. I…[Read more]

@rae

I don’t think anyone was saying that you need to change Chase. Like Loopy and Whaley said, it’s not bad that he has that flaw, because he’s a flawed character that grows and changes in your story. We were just concerned that you were portraying him as more of a hero and that flaw was celebrated.

@whalekeeper @loopylin correct me if I’m wrong…XD

@ellette-giselle

What was he thinking? Hmm, maybe he WASN’T thinking. He often tries to do what’s right……. but sometimes he would do with a good long moment of thought process.

*sighs*

Now, because he didn’t think, he’s gonna die. So cold, so sad, bye-bye now. (Moral of the story; always think before you act kids)

lol 😂😂

Anyone want to read what h…

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