[Koshka]

@ellette-giselle

Leo

“Good question.” He sat back on his heels and reached for another broken piece. “I think it’s some sort of game, or at least that’s what a friend of mine said. You have a picture that’s been cut up into a lot of pieces, and you have to put the pieces together to see the full picture. Or something like that.”

He rearranged the pieces in the gaping hole of missing tile until he found two that seemed to fit together.

“It’s something they do on Sordes. Weird, huh?”

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[Koshka]

@ellette-giselle

Ooooh, you’re cruel. Tossing that out there like that after I’ve already fallen for this character and everything. *Turns my glare on you*

XD

Leo

The two tiles had broken up, pieces scattered across the hallway. Leo knelt to pick up a piece. It’s edge was rough, sharp enough to cut skin. Porcelain then. Although it had been broken by a metal filing cabinet. So not quite porcelain.

Hmm…he still had a bottle of sealant, and his touch. The air conditioner hadn’t needed much to stop the leak. No knowing where he’d even find replacement tile.

He glanced up at Rory. “You wearing those gloves, kid?”

Rory nodded, lifting his begloved hands.

“Good. Looks like we’ve got a jigsaw puzzle.”

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[Koshka]

@ellette-giselle

Oh gracious. XD

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[Koshka]

@ellette-giselle

Oooof…no…*glared at Wyoh*

I’ll probably zip them off somewhere to *ahem* illustrate Leoron’s interesting fixing methods.

Rory is not fine, he has broken ribs and a cracked knee, and no you don’t build immunity to broken bones. XD

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[Koshka]

@ellette-giselle

Well…

Since you’re helping out with the Susan story, you saw how I typically plot, and um…I’m almost done with his plot diagram…so now actual scene writing is supposed to start…

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[Koshka]

@ellette-giselle

Oh yes. The Button. XD

(I think It’s your turn? But I can go ahead and just scoot them off to some new assignment if you want.)

Or….. I could call the agents back and have them deal with him…….

or you could bring in a rebel captain to look over the place. Say they’ve driven the agents out of the school for a time. am totally not trying to keep Rory boy safe long enough for his cracked ribs to heal, poor kid. Plus, variantion…

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[Koshka]

@ellette-giselle

Yay! Thank you. They will now be highlighted on my playlist sheet.

(I’m actually considering having him play a type of guitar. Like, just a random thing to throw into his character. It’s so different from the aesthetic of the book [space outlaws and warring gangs aren’t very “calm guitar”ish], but he just seems like the kind of guy to sit in his cockpit and play around with chords)

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[Koshka]

@ellette-giselle

Yay! Was there a song that really seemed to fit him? I trying to find one that’s his theme song, XD

(Also, the Sounds of Power music is thanks to my brother for sharing with me, so you also get a glimpse of the kind of instrumental he likes to listen to)

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[Koshka]

@ellette-giselle

Thought you might be interested. Here’s the playlist I randomly decided to compile for Leo’s story (CotR)

Instrumental – aesthetic music

From “Sounds of Power” Epic instrumental

• “Faith”
• “The Key”
• “Got Fight”
• “Courage”

From Emily Black’s “Cloak of the Light” sound track

• “The Fine Art of Sarcasm”
• “Chicago”
• “Betrayed”
• “Mystery Girl”
• “Headlights!”
• “Honor the Fallen”

From James Horner’s “Apollo” soundtrack

• “Launch Control”
• “Re-Entry and Splashdown”
• “Darkside of of the Moon”
• “Into the Lem”
• “Master Alarm”

Lyrics – character music

“Always on Time” by Elevation Worship

“On the Way Up” by Apollo LTD

“Always You” by Apollo LTD

“Living Proof” by Apollo LTD

“In the Night” by Andrew Peterson

“We Will Survive” by Andrew Peterson

“Miracles (Never Thought that I’d be One)” by Indiana Bible College

“My World Needs You” by Indiana Bible College

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[Koshka]

@esther-c

GREAT point.

Why thank you. XD

 

Honestly, if you do want to write MG fiction (and I hope you do) I recommend doing some research into the psychology of 8-13 year olds. Not only will it help your writing, it will help you understand your readers, and your own memories. (On that note, try to remember what it was like to be a kid, not how you remember remebering what it was like. A lot of “kid’s” books I’ve read had childish adults in children’s bodies because the author forgot what childhood is like through a child’s eyes.)

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[Koshka]

@rae

Ahh! Animal fantasy! I adore this stuff so much. Yes, one of my series is a bunch of wolves and foxes and possibly sea faring black footed sand cats all picking fights with one another. It’s great fun. XD

@raxforge

I definitely approve. We need more animal fantasy that isn’t down right weird. Squirrels are hilarious, and a secret kingdom of squirrels sending exiled tractors out into the known world absolutely needs written.

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[Koshka]

@esther-c

*Literally comes out of nowhere*

MG!! My genre. Yes! We need more good MG fiction.

– What did/do you enjoy about your favorite MG novels?

Action, but not necessarily what you’d first think of. I wanted my heros to do something that mattered, even if it was sitting in a dark closet for hours, bravely taking hardship and fighting their own fears, because then I could do something that Mattered, even in a fictional world. I wanted heros I could look up to and admire, like Peter and Lucy and Sara Crew. I wanted characters I could identify with, that I could feel like I knew. And yes, I wanted them to be victorious in their great fight for good (which doesn’t mean fantasy. I adored The Trumpet of the Swan growing up, as well as Green Ember and Narnia).

I absolutely could not stand Elsie Dinsmore. Still can’t, actually. She makes me positivity furious.

– What do you think the MG category needs more of?

NobleBright fiction. Stories with loving families as well as lonely orphans. Stories where the darkness never really wins the war. True stories. Hopeful stories. Stories that glorify God’s love.

And of course, chocolate. How many characters do you know that get chocolate?

– What do you think it needs less of?

Um. Romance. I don’t mind adults falling in love and getting married in the background of a kid’s book. I don’t even really mind young teens liking each other, or decided that they will one day marry someone (Sarah and Janner, for instance). But really, kids today are under so much pressure to pair up, that they aren’t allowed to live their childhoods. MG covers the age where abstract thinking is developing, where kids are just starting to understand emotions and things they can’t see. Be careful. These kids will pick up on the emotions and turmoil of characters, even if they don’t understand what’s going on.

– If you have any plot or character ideas that you won’t use, I’d love to hear them!!

It’s not really a plot idea I’ve worked with in particular, but what if your MC is currently in this transition of Concrete to Abstract? You could show the confusion and stress that comes with this, how the world can be a very scary place (but that it’s okay, because we’re never really alone). Think of the characters you related to as a kid. What were their struggles?

However you want to approach this, it would add a depth to your MC that your young readers would relate with. 8-14 are some crazy years. Yes, you’re growing up, but more than that, your mind is changing. That’s terribly stressful.

 

 

Anyway, I hope some of that was helpful. Go forth and write good things!

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[Koshka]

Some reads we never forget

Some books we never forgive

Haven’t seen the end of this yet

We’ll write as long as we live.

All eyes on the hidden door

To the lonely laptop borne

We’ll ride in through the scribbling storm

Till we write our long forgotten WIPs…

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@grcr

That’s really cool.

I know it would be a ton of work, but it’s beautiful. If you do get a comic book published, I’d buy it.

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[Koshka]

@grcr

That looks so good! And like a ton of work. Wow.

So would the book open to the left? Is that a normal thing for comic books (*has no clue since current comic expirence  is nearly non-existent*)?

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