Keilah H.

@theshadow nah mate, you’re fine

(yep I’m leaning fully into it now)

thanks!

@the_lost-journal yep! And then share your stories with people and ask them what they thought and if there’s anything they think can change. You don’t have to follow their suggestions if you think it’ll conflict with the story, but if several people are all giving you the same or similar feedback, it’s a good idea to at least check out why.

I read today’s. Gonna have to go back for Saturday’s.

sometimes I miss a chapter if I see it, mark it as important, but then it gets buried in my other emails.

@ellette-giselle oooooh

things are REALLY heating up now!

@rae that’s cute! I think it’s a funny idea.

listen everyone I’m so sorry for diverting this topic from “contemporary writing” to “Shadow has decided Keilah sounds like Sniper now and there’s nothing any of them can do about it.” It’s 10:20 at night right now, I’m sitting in the car on my way home from a day trip, and I have only a fraction of an idea what I’m doing with my life.

@theshadow

I got my eye on ya, mate.

look what you’ve done you’ve encouraged my obsession lollllllll

@rae

B would be fun!

@rae I’d love to do that! No idea if I’d be able to do all of them but yeah!

@koshka lolll

my brother and I share memes with each other all the time too

@koshka lol where’d you see it?

You could also do something from the perspective of lyen and gorb soldiers during the wars, maybe two members of the Faithful who don’t want to kill each other since they follow the same Savior. (idk if there are gorb Faithful but I would be surprised if there weren’t at least one or two)

Or have one of the other species hear of the lyens’…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal lol

@linus-smallrpint Is there a reason for that?

Cause I remember Oliver saying the gorb species was “savage” compared to the lyens, who from your reading seem to be pretty civilized. But I’m also not inclined to trust the lyens’ rating of an enemy’s civility, so.

But that makes me think. Maybe there should be other books set in this…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!

by the way, will we ever see more gorbs? I kinda miss your humorous Australian lizard people. (you somehow struck everything I like with that one lol)

@linus-smallprint I love that drawing of Tyn! She’s a good balance of humanoid and animal. I like it when authors do that.

@koshka bruh

First off, that’s one quarter, not one third, second, why did they have to put “60 million” and “20 million” twice?

@the_lost-journal That’s great!

Keep the creatures by the way. They’re all really cool.

@linus-smallprint interesting! So his mother is probably trying to get him to use his magic. Why has she not gone more or less crazy like the other wizards yet? (Or has she and we just haven’t seen that yet.)

Why was she in the form of a crow instead of being half human? Did she use more magic than her husband and son or was it something else?…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed that’s awesome!

where and when exactly would this take place? (I know it’s a fantasy world, but the names of your characters are making me curious as to which cultures they’re based off.)

@ellette-giselle I’m pretty sure that’s not her actual attire, so it’s not too big of a deal for me. That image looks more of a…[Read more]