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@jane-maree probably general overall chapter, but also stuff like inconsistencies (which some readers have already pointed out), and yes showing/telling stuff. Thank you!!!

@jane-maree you’re welcome, ’twas my pleasure 😉

@seekjustice okay, i think i let you have access. lemme know if it didn’t work.

@rochellaine just looked at it! hilarious! *looks at outlining notes to make sure something like that doesn’t happen* 😉 😀

@rochellaine haha, okay sounds good 😀

@rochellaine ah, no I didn’t see that! was it recent? then i might be able to find it…..

@rochellaine I’m gonna have to go now. I hope you get lots of writing done! 😉 I might be on again Monday, but if not, probably Thursday, Friday and the weekend.

@rochellaine Thank you so much for reading my first chapter! I’ve never had anyone read my first drafts before. like, ever. thanks so much for your honesty and help! <3 😀

@rochellaine that would be great, yes.

@rochellaine okay, awesome! 🙂

by the way, I forgot to mention to everyone to ignore the spelling/grammar mistakes 🙂 haven’t edited yet…

@rochellaine @seekjustice @dragon-snapper @dekreel anyone on? I’m writing some more

@rochellaine did it work? I hope i did it right…..

@kaya-young aw, you’re very welcome!

@skredder wow that’s amazing! 😀

@rochellaine Cool, I like to sing too…….just not around people. But I’m literally humming 50-75% of the day.

Oops, I actually just commented on your blog post. I didn’t mention anything about KP (except who I was), I won’t in the future, if you want 🙂 I get ya; being an author is also a business 😉

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messed up your tag, hehe @rochellaine

@waterlily Congratulations! It looks awesome!!! 😀 *chucks confetti everywhere*

I commented on your blog post 😉

@rochellaie I just checked it out! Awesome! I didn’t know you liked to sing (…..or did I?……)

I think that plan for a second blog post sounds good! 🙂

@rochellaine @kaya-young @jane-maree @seekjustice @notawriter @skredder

i just realized I posted too many chapters for the Esther reading schedule. There are ten chapters, I scheduled fourteen. Ahem…..

anyway, it was awesome being able to discuss these two books with all of you wonderful people. Thank you for participating! <3