Kaymart

Kaymart

Kaymart replied to the topic Bits & Pieces: A critique group. in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 years, 6 months ago

I must apologize for a few reasons.

First, because I haven’t been around. That’s completely my fault. I had actually forgotten about this account altogether. I became quite occupied with StoryEmbers.org and so this one completely slipped my mind.

If you would like me to begin posting bits and pieces here again, I shall do that sometime “soon”.
Kaymart replied to the topic Bits & Pieces: A critique group. in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years ago

I’m back – at last – and I’ll begin posting some bits and pieces in this thread. Today is when I plan to start.

Let’s get started…

This first bit is the first part of a character interview. Well, of sorts. You’ll see. Warning, it is over 1K words and it’s not finished.

I hesitate as I enter the coffee shop, glancing left and right as I try to…[Read more]
Kaymart posted a new activity comment 6 years, 2 months ago

I did wonder about fewer people…but I haven’t been around in the last couple of months or so, and didn’t worry about it.

Should I move over to Story Embers, also? Or would I be better off just staying here?

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Kaymart replied to the topic Bits & Pieces: A critique group. in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 2 months ago

THANKS to you both!!

I haven’t been able to get here, and had forgotten about this story. I may work on it occasionally, but I’ll be posting other bits and pieces if you don’t mind.
Kaymart replied to the topic Bits & Pieces: A critique group. in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 4 months ago

For instance…

Stronger than you Think

[Markus Brody] stood at the top of the hill nearest his house located on the outskirts of Bramble Creek, [State name]. He gazed into the distance, asking himself why he didn’t just leave this place. No one was likely to miss him if he made a run for it.

I’m not brave enough to do that. As badly as Pa…[Read more]
Kaymart started the topic Bits & Pieces: A critique group. in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 4 months ago

I’m thinking of starting a critique group where I will post bits & pieces as I write them. Sometimes I write out of order. Most of the time I try to keep it “in line”. Will it be all right if I post those bits & pieces here – in this topic?
Kaymart replied to the topic The 1 and only … me. in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 4 months ago
Kaymart replied to the topic The 1 and only … me. in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 4 months ago

Okay. I’m trying to decide how I want to do this.

Sharing my writing, I mean. I want to, and Daeus mentioned a group in the forum…but I couldn’t locate it. I’ll also share a few book covers with you guys, if you don’t mind. (tough if you do, because I am anyway).
Kaymart posted a new activity comment 6 years, 4 months ago

Sorry. I know that probably came out wrong. I’m just curious to know why I haven’t seen anything for THIS YEAR.

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- Rochellaine replied 6 years, 4 months ago
  
  Hi Kaymart!
  The reason no one replied to you is simply that you didn’t tag anyone so no one saw your question. 😉 That’s okay, but I just wanted to let you know no one was ignoring you.
  
  Now, to answer the question: Kingdom Pen has been nearly deserted over the past several months. Most of our members have gone to a new writing website,…[Read more]
  - Kaymart replied 6 years, 2 months ago
    
    I did wonder about fewer people…but I haven’t been around in the last couple of months or so, and didn’t worry about it.
    
    Should I move over to Story Embers, also? Or would I be better off just staying here?
Kaymart posted an update 6 years, 4 months ago

Uh, why are there all these contests advertised from 2015 and 2012 but nothing from this year? Shouldn’t stuff from more than the last year have been removed by now?
- Kaymart replied 6 years, 4 months ago
  
  Sorry. I know that probably came out wrong. I’m just curious to know why I haven’t seen anything for THIS YEAR.
  - Rochellaine replied 6 years, 4 months ago
    
    Hi Kaymart!
    The reason no one replied to you is simply that you didn’t tag anyone so no one saw your question. 😉 That’s okay, but I just wanted to let you know no one was ignoring you.
    
    Now, to answer the question: Kingdom Pen has been nearly deserted over the past several months. Most of our members have gone to a new writing website,…[Read more]
    - Kaymart replied 6 years, 2 months ago
      
      I did wonder about fewer people…but I haven’t been around in the last couple of months or so, and didn’t worry about it.
      
      Should I move over to Story Embers, also? Or would I be better off just staying here?
Kaymart replied to the topic Too many ideas in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 years, 4 months ago

THANK YOU, CATWING! Sorry for not getting back to you sooner!
Kaymart replied to the topic New Topic: Is this okay? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 4 months ago

I’m sorry I haven’t been back except that one time a few days ago. I’ve neglected this site mostly because I forgot (let’s be honest). But also because I haven’t had much time for writing. No, that’s not right. Let’s just say I’ve been foolish and leave it at that.

The novel critique forum, you say, Daeus? I couldn’t find it when I looked before…[Read more]
Kaymart replied to the topic New Topic: Is this okay? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 4 months ago

I sadly have not worked in this story very much since posting the bit I did at the top. But I think continuing will be a must now that I’ve reread the comments here. I hope you won’t be disappointed.
Kaymart replied to the topic Too many ideas in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 years, 4 months ago

Possible titles

~ Stand Together
~ The High Road
~ Marching on
~ Grief-Stricken

~ Tough Choices / Decisions
~ Look to the Stars
~ Deep Roots

~ Love me This way
~ I Bleed for you
~ Stand strong / Together

As usual, please let me know if you would like a title. I have these and many more.
Kaymart replied to the topic Too many ideas in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 6 years, 4 months ago

Oh. I had forgotten about this conversation!

How about I post a few more story titles and the plots that I think goes with them? (Am I able to post photos?) *shrugs* I’ll try anyway.
Kaymart posted a new activity comment 6 years, 4 months ago

I am also curious about WHERE to do such writing? I want to start a short story (which I’ve been advised to do) and for some reason unbeknownst to me I write BETTER much of the time when it’s directly in a website or something for people to read. [?]

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Kaymart posted an update 6 years, 4 months ago

Whew! I’ve finally come back. Not entirely my fault – honest – but I did forget I was a member here for a time. Good thing I wrote down my username and password.

In any case, I’d really like to start participating here more, if that’s all right. I want to write and share biblical stories with people. And getting feedback and advice to better my…[Read more]
- Kaymart replied 6 years, 4 months ago
  
  I am also curious about WHERE to do such writing? I want to start a short story (which I’ve been advised to do) and for some reason unbeknownst to me I write BETTER much of the time when it’s directly in a website or something for people to read. [?]
Kaymart and Daeus are now friends 6 years, 8 months ago

Daeus

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Kaymart posted an update 6 years, 8 months ago

Thank you very much, @Daeus (your name can’t be highlighted?)
Kaymart posted an update 6 years, 8 months ago

Who is in charge? As in who handles member disputes and questions and such?
I need to know when I signed up. My bad memory is in effect right now because I forgot to write it down!
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