@kaya-young
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Kaya Young replied to the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@jenwriter17Â Oh, Thanks! The second one was from my WIP, but I’m not sure I’ll keep it because it has kinda taken a new direction.
There wasn’t anything you see I could improve on? Maybe it’s decent, I could have just looked at it waaay to much.
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years ago
@jenwriter17Â Â Oh my! That was awesome!
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Kaya Young replied to the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
Also @notawriter I really love the word “Nextly” 😉
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Kaya Young replied to the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@dekreel  @jenwriter17  @notawriter @daeus Ok, so here goes… I honestly am not sure what exactly is wrong with my dialogue, it just seems off. Without further hesitation, I present to you some of my conversations:
“You did a really good job with your prayer! Who wrote it again? Daisy paused, her hand hovering over a box of tea boasting a choc…[Read more]
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Kaya Young started the topic When characters won't talk right… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
My dialogue… has much to be desired. The more dialogue I write, the more I loathe what I’m writing, and I have no clue how to fix it!
So what is your best advice for writing dialogue? Any and all advice, insights, tips and what-not are greatly appreciated!
@jenwriter17  @rochellaine  @notawriter  @ingridrd  @that_writer_girl_99 @any-one…..
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 8 years ago
@jenwriter17 I’m not reading, but I am writing. I hope your reading goes well!
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Strong Christian Women in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years ago
Thanks @jenwriter17 ! This is exciting! 🙂
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Strong Christian Women in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years ago
@jenwriter17Â This sounds really cool! can I join in too?
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Kaya Young replied to the topic So… scary thought… I might write a children's story in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@daughteroftheking  I’m just gonna randomly jump in here to say:
“I love your story idea and it sounds super cool!”Â
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
@notawriter I guess my idea of a futuristic name is a name that is a bit unusual, or that you don’t normally see. But that’s just my interpretation of it. 🙂
Kirlas reminds me of Star Trek too!
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
Thanks @ingridrd ! Those are snazzy names! I really like Flair and Penn.
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
Those are a really great! Thanks @rochellaine ! I especially like Kirlas and Rillor.
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
OOoo, Tyver is a pretty cool name, and so is Torren! Thanks @dekreel !
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years ago
@aislinn-mollisong Great names!
Okay y’all. I need some futuristic names, but futuristic names that sound… normal. Thanks in advance!
@notawriter  @ingridrd  @rochellaine @anyone
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Kaya Young replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@dekreel That was officially super awesome! 🙂 😉 🙂
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Question in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years ago
@hannah-c I would definitely read a book like that!
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years ago
@rochellaine Cool! So when do I get to find out what happens to your “poor little heroine”?
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Kaya Young replied to the topic What's the best book you've read recently? in the forum Book Discussions 8 years ago
@sage-g I’ll have to check out Book of a Thousand Days. Kindle is wonderful!
@ashlyvye Ohhh! You really like the Mistborn Trilogy!. 😉 I’ll have to find and read them!
@rochellaine HHmm… I like old romance novels! I’ll have to read those too before you *threateningly* throw those GLH books at me!
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Informal Survey in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@daeus I would like to become an established author, but in terms of a career I feel that God has called me to be a missionary. I view writing as an extension of that. I would like for thousands of people to read what I write (if it’s any good) but it’s not my main goal.
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Kaya Young replied to the topic Informal Survey in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years ago
@daeus For me, that’s why I write.
To be completely honest, I haven’t been writing for very long at all, but I love to read. Sometimes I’ve found myself disgusted by the lack of depth and “fluff” of magazine articles, and the stuff that’s in our local newspaper. So I’ve set a goal for myself to try and submit 10 articles to stuff like KP, f…[Read more]
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