Katherine

@aratrea All right, thank you. I’ll keep that in mind when we get to that point in our story. 🙂

@GracieGirl *peers in* *looks around* What everyone else is saying, I think. One of the large things it to make it easily readable, whatever the length. So lots of paragraph breaks and section breaks with headings and such.

@aratrea Thanks, I will let him know.

I can’t even remember what I said, except something about keeping that in mind (about the backsliding) and not being quite sure what specific event causes Amrei to trust Nylian. I think I said there might not be on specific event, but the fact that they have to trust each other out of necessity to complete…[Read more]

@aratrea This isn’t related to these videos, but I wasn’t sure where to ask… My brother (Leumeister) hasn’t yet accessed Theme Mastery. We both got the premium deal, with the extra $80 per person. Is he able to sign in using his Kingdom Pen account to access the course, or does he need to use mine? And what about for the forums for discussion…[Read more]

@corissa-maiden-of-praise I take it you’re referring to the one about cat and go-head Australia? XD No worries 😉

@salome01w4g Cool. Except you’re in America, so I dunno if it’s as easy here as it seems to be there. 😉

@salome01w4g Cool

@anyone who’s talking about goats
Some friends of ours moved to a farm a few years back (like a hobby farm where all the animals are pets rather than a proper farm, but it’s great) But they got their first two goats before they moved, so they had these adorable little kids in their backyard! 😀 They have lots of goats now, and horses and one pony,…[Read more]

@anyone who’s talking about goats Our friends moved to a farm a few years back (like a hobby farm where all the animals are pets rather than a proper farm, but it’s great) But they got their first two goats before they moved, so they had these adorable little kids in their backyard! 😀 They have lots of goats now, and horses and one pony, among…[Read more]

@emily Ooh, Peleg Chronicles! (I haven’t been keeping up with the convo, just saw your response XD ) That’s a great trilogy, though quite preachy, I found, so a non-Christian audience might not like it so much.

@katherine I would say that is fine. Getting feedback is part of the writing process, so as long as they (obviously) aren’t changing it themselves and are just giving you their thoughts, then yes. That is fine. 🙂

@warrioroftherealm Two or three. The second title does sound darker than the third. It depends what angle you are going for.

@daeus love the ‘When fate seeks to destroy you, where can you turn?’ hook. Much better than the others. 😉

@jane-maree My Writing was interrupted but I am glad to join you.

@that_writer_girl_99 @graciegirl @catwing @emily @jenni-grace @winter-rose @josiahdeboer It’s been a while since I wrote with you all! I see you’ve made a new Corner. Let me decorate. *hangs a bouquet of pink roses over the door and scatters petals everywhere* There. Now, would anyone like to write with me? I’ll bring truffles and raspberries.

@aratrea Possibly… I just thought the fact that his relationship with his son wasn’t everything he had hoped it would be was sad. 😛

I just finished it (again 😛 ) and I have to say, I think I enjoyed his story a little more the second time round – not because I knew what was going to happen though (I had a vague idea, but I couldn’t remember…[Read more]

@christi-eaton Thank you so much for sharing. This gave words to thoughts that always confused me. In the past, I have tested as an extrovert. But I think certain life experiences have molded me into more of an introvert. So I can speak for the extroverted ones: they must pass through a season of depression and loneliness to see art and beauty and…[Read more]

@aratrea That’s a really interesting question… One thing I find sad is that Aquila’s relationship with his son isn’t all he had hoped it would be, so for one thing I’d probably tweak that a little and make them more friendly with each other. 🙂

Legends of Light, @kate-flournoy? *scratches head* I may have heard something about them somewhere… XD

Welcome, @jessi-rae! Fairy tales retellings and fantasy are quite fun. I’ve tried my hand at futuristic/dystopian type stories too, but I mainly stick to fantasy. I don’t have very many female protagonists, though. That’s going to change one…[Read more]