Kate Flournoy

@rochellaine

I don’t know, I’m just terrible at writing descriptions of people fighting each other, especially when it’s not a duel with swords or anything, its more impersonal.

No, I haven’t, but I might have heard of it.

Cool! And how’s that going? Hopefully better than my dogfighting.

@rochellaine

Hello! I’m currently trying to edit/rewrite a dogfighting scene (not, like, an actual dogfight, but aeroplanes fighting each other).

I’m terrible at fight scenes, so it’s not coming along very well. You?

@jenwriter17

Yep, I’m likely to be on later 😀

@jenwriter17

I’m editing my novella currently!

@rochellaine

Oh, good! I worry overly much about whether I’ve offended people and feel the need to apologise until I get to the point where I’m apologising for apologising. 😛

I’m sad for your computer by the way 🙂 I hope its okay *sends encouraging hugs to the computer*

@notawriter  Oh, I’m so glad you like her!

@sarah-anson  Those are epic!!!  🙂

I haven’t been here in a while. *scans crowd* Wow, so much new art! Awesome stuff, people.

Here’ my contribution:

~Sarah

Okay, thanks @jenwriter17 !

Ah, okay. Thanks! @skredder

@skredder Totally! Plus, I think it makes characters much more interesting when they don’t always do what’s right, or are even adverse to doing what’s right until the very end of the book. It makes me root for them more, and want them to change.

Btw, How do you put in the little line between your comment and your username? I can’t seem to figure…[Read more]

Interesting idea, @skredder. I’ll try it out. Kirin is a great guy, but I really don’t want him to have “Hero Syndrome” (As in he does everything right just because it’s right.). And I also don’t want him to be an anti-hero, because it doesn’t fit. So he needs to have enough moral strength to do the right things sometimes, but he also needs to be…[Read more]

Hey @jenwriter17, sorry to bother you again, but would you mind giving me access to all the chapters you have up so far on your book? I requested access for chapter 6 and I’ve read chapter 1, but I can’t see the other ones(forgive me if it’s just something I’m overlooking in Docs, I don’t use them very often, xD). Anyway, happy writing! 🙂

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Ah, I know I just did this, at least last time anyone was on this topic, but talking about my character’s most embarrassing moment was to good to pass up, @daughteroftheking, thanks for just an awesome question. Okay. Here we go.

Kirin: Kirin would rather talk about it, because every time he gets embarrassed it seems to be in front of a bunch of…[Read more]

Hey there @jenwriter! I read your first chapter, and I really enjoyed it. And I think I just sent a request to access the rest of the chapters… I’m not sure though. My google account doesn’t like me sometimes. 🙂

Anyways, I really liked the first chapter, and I’ve got a few thoughts if you don’t mind me sharing them.

First, I really liked how…[Read more]

@rochellaine

By the way, sorry if I sounded a bit rude in my last post. Sometimes I just say exactly what I think. So sorry about that 🙂

@rochellaine

Sorry 🙁

Good night!

@rochellaine

No, I haven’t, but that sounds pretty cool! I like when you can do that sort of thing to a story!

They get older in the sequel, but I wouldn’t say that they were grown up. Well, the fact is, Curdie in the book is more mature than most twenty-year-olds. But still Irene is……..she’s never been my favourite character in the first p…[Read more]

@rochellaine

When I read A Christmas Carol I was expecting a kind of cheesy Christmas story and it freaked me out. But I did like it a lot, so it wasn’t bad (I really don’t like cheesy Christmas stories).

I have found it. unfortunately, I’m stuck on the fact that an eight-year-old and a twelve-year-old are played by grown adults and yet still…[Read more]