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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@christianna-hellwig @rochellaine @emma-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99
Thanks so much for your suggestions, everyone! Here’s what I have now.
“Oh, stars that remember the firstthings forgotten
How earth and its peoples were early begotten
They looked and beheld through a pane of dark glass
The earth in a swirling, untamable mass
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@christianna-hellwig Thanks so much! I’ll take a look over this as soon as I get a chance.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 2 months ago
Whoops @introvert_girl
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel Oh okay! Hmmm…I’m not sure that sounds very feminine.
@introvert-girl Persephone!!!! YAS. 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 2 months ago
@skredder I’ve seen that movie! Unfortunately I’m pretty sure it’s her last name
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Joy replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 2 months ago
@ingridrd Yes it’s a girl. … Can Peregrine be a girl’s name?
@rochellaine That’s funny — I was JUST on that site! Unfortunately I didn’t find names I like :-/
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@emma-flournoy Ha! Well, we’ll see. I’d certainly love to.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Ha. Those are literally the story of my life. 😂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writing Inspiration in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@hannah-c Boy, do I need this reminder sometimes. 🙂 To be honest, I’m at a weird stage in my writing career. I’m struggling to find time to write *coughschoolcough*, but I want to write so bad. All. The. Time. And that just doesn’t work when life is so busy. *sighs*
I guess I need to start making time to write because I don’t want my…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel Is your character a girl?
All I can think of are names like Peregrine (for a boy), Parrianne and Perris (those aren’t that good, I know). 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@emma-flournoy Sure, here’s one. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oV9qnLtpy4Cwn8-JFfJaXzOn4A5-yqRBR-AqlFIyYdk/edit?usp=sharing
Yeah, song creation and all that. I probably should have come up with something more original, but in my defense the song creation is the basis for the whole magical system, the last book’s allegorical aspects, and the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @rochellaine Thanks. 😀
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Joy replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine @jenali @epicaddie2 @the-real-kapeefer
Thank you all! 😀
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Joy replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 2 months ago
@waterlily @rochellaine @skredder @ingridrd @anyone
Peri can be a nickname, right? What are some names that can have a nickname of Peri?
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 More for metric pattern, but either one.
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Daeus started the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hi KeePers,
Any of you who write structured poetry, I could use a bit of help with a poem I’ve written. This is for the fantasy novel I’m writing and essentially recounts the first events of the world.
My problem is that I know a few spots have clunky meter. I generally have a good ear for meter and maybe I could fix this by myself, but…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Unlikable Protagonist? in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@introvert_girl Sam really said it already, but you can also add a backstory to show why the character acts the way they do. The overall tone of the story will help too. I think though that the most important thing is proactivity, like Sam said.
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Joy replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99Â KP-versary! Congrats!
Many hugs to my fellow Whovian 😉
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