Julia R.

Thank you, @Christi-Eaton.

@CK4Always Yep, that’s how it should be.

@emma-flournoy @kate-flournoy @his-instrument What about this?

When fate seeks to destroy you, where can you turn?

Matthew has sworn to avenge a murder…

@kate-flournoy Don’t worry, I was sort of like that too when I first read it. 😉

Wow… um… wow.

Okay that was basically my existence in a nutshell… I think I’m going to be floored and absolutely useless for the rest of the day. 😛
Thank you so much for sharing, @Christi-Eaton. That was beyond encouraging.

Hello, @Emerald-Flyer! Pleased to make your acquaintance. *tips hat and bows* Pen Wielder. I like that. *waves pen around dangerously* Have you got any favorite books?

Welcome! We are so glad to have you around here! I love seeing all of the new faces around the forum.:D Again, welcome!!

@emma-flournoy Sold? Not very many. When it was free though, I got something like 2,000 downloads. I haven’t been promoting it really. That’s why I’m trying to revive this ad thing. I actually have time for it almost. 😉

@emerald-flyer Cool dragon. 🙂 May I assume you write fantasy?

@kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy Got it. I’ll try to come up with something better tomorrow.

A story of action, adventure, and justice, written in a classical style.

@Daeus @His-Instrument me no likey. There’s no emotional hook.

@Winter-Rose awesome! Survival is always a good thing… ;P

Welcome to the magical land of Kingdom Pen, @aislinn-mollisong! *hands you a bowl of celebratory ice cream* *hopes you like ice cream* (If you don’t I’ll eat it for you) Glad you could join us!

@his-instrument I think attracting classical lovers is worth losing non classical lovers.

@daeus That sounds good. The only thing I would ask myself is, will “written in a classical style” possibly be a deterrent to anyone? If so, maybe you want to temper that statement with something about how it pertains to modern life somehow. Know what I’m saying? But if you’re not really targeting the whatever-percent if the population who is…[Read more]

@his-instrument Thank. Those are great suggestions.

I do, though, need to have that one liner right at the beginning. The idea is that people have a three-second attention span. They won’t read the whole synopsis unless their attention is instantly piqued. Let me see if I can make the wording work.

A story of action, adventure, and justice,…[Read more]

@daeus I agree with Kate. I really prefer the first synopsis. If you do go with the second one, though, make sure you change “His enemy has powerful” to “His enemy is powerful.” 🙂
I would recommend changing “Matthew is sworn to avenge…” to “Matthew has sworn to avenge…” I know that “is sworn” is a thing. That is, I know “sworn” can be used as…[Read more]

@Jessi-rae Hello! I spell my name Jessi too! I seem to meet more and more people who spell their name like that. And I thought I was being original. 😛 My tag is just Jess though because people like to spell it with an e. Anyhoo, welcome to KP!