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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@lifeofkatie I think I’ve got it fixed.
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@lifeofkatie On the button?
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Snapper replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@lifeofkatie *eats all the ice cream*
@emma-flournoy I won’t tell Josiah what you said about frogs. *mourns over frogs*
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths. Hmm. I just noticed one day that it was true because…I noticed it.
The thing I don’t like about romances is that they are fake. They make them too emotional. People aren’t like that.
They are so totally fake, but I don’t actually think people are any less emotional. They’re just less cheesy about it. ……[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Yikes! These tags aren’t working. Let me try again. @shannon @emily @winter-rose.
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie
Okay! How about this?
http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-show-dont-tell-course/
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Snapper replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of your characters react at that point or the reader will not react. For instance, if you think you can get your rea…
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@Ethryndal This place would not be the same if you had not come. Nor all the peeps on it. NOPE. So we can all applaud God with a fury for what He’s put together.
And it’s really great on the writing side of things too. 😛 Because it’s wonderful to know how to write well, and KP sure does brilliantly putting out the learning.
*poke*…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie Thanks. I’m working on a revision. I’ll get back to you sooner or later. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@princessfoo Righty. Well, I don’t really read romance and I’m not an expert on it, but IÂ have written it just a bit.
My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of…[Read more]
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragongeek Aha! Your cover image is Toothless!!! AWESOME!
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Snapper replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@ethryndal First off, I’ve been meaning to say this.

Secondly,
YOU’VE BEEN ON FOR A YEAR?!! A YEAR ALREADY! SWEET!

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Jane Maree replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus personally the site strikes me as good but not eye-catching, this could be because I’m a little of a website snob, with having a web design and developer as a sister. 😛 My thoughts are:
– seconding what everyone’s said about the ‘get your free training now’ button being jarring and not professional or fitting with the rest of the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose @ingridrd @princessfoo Ah! My bad. Here, try again.
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Daeus started the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Hi friends,
You may or may not know that show don’t tell is one of my favorite writing topics. The practical application of this is that I’m currently putting together an in-depth course to help people master the subject. Part 1 of this course is just about finished and ready for me to launch!
In preparation, I was wondering if you could take a…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@Ethryndal awww I’m so glad to know you through the forum. <3 <3 *sends you a kangaroo*
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Daeus replied to the topic An Interesting Concept I'm Working On in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragongeek lol. Our editor in chief is using the same concept. http://josiahdegraaf.com/the-chronicles-of-morshan/
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Snapper replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
Oh, and good choice with TSFH! Yeah, there name is awful, but the music is great. So I call them TSFH. Have you heard any Audiomachine songs?
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Snapper replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragongeek Awesome name. I myself am Dragon Snapper, pleased to meet your confetti-filled acquaintance. 😀
What’s your favorite … um … *tries to think of an original question*
Meh, forget that.
What’s your least favorite book? I personally can’t stand the Incredible Journey. Or, what was that other book? Ah, the Glass Sentence. I also…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragongeek Hi! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet.
*patiently waits to see what your answers are to Kate’s questions*
Oh, and of course I have to ask what your personality type is. 🙂
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