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@Ethryndal definitely better. I love it just how it is, but as Daeus mentioned, you might cut out the first bit about her step-sister without any damage and probably with benefits.

@ethryndal Like normal, I love the voice you use.

You might keep a long version like this for use on your blog, but if you’re going to use this on a sales page or book cover, yeah, it needs to be short.

You can probably make the point about her being heroine material shorter and cut out the part about her step-sister

@sam-kowal I can see how it must be fun to have Stan as a dragon. 😉

@Ethryndal your sneaking suspicion is absolutely correct, but otherwise this is absolutely brilliant.

Seriously, and I almost forgave it for being too long because all of it was awesome. So yeah. It’s good. *vigorous nodding*

@sam-kowal

Um…sorry, Stan. You can’t eat him. 😛

Thanks everyone. 😀  I really enjoyed writing it.

@Daeus I already said this, but congratulations. 😉

@that_writer_Girl_99 @jess-penrose I’m signing out now. I wrote 2029 words. Good luck!

@jess-penrose Hi again! 😀

@that_writer_girl_99 Yay new ideas! New ideas are the best. 😀 That’s the other thing…I’d been writing Sector One for a long time. I wanted something new.

@that_writer_girl_99 Well…I had been writing the sequel to my sci-fi novel Sector One, but then I took a break for ethical reason which I need to re-evaluate…(villains, heroes, but mostly the people in between…) so now I’m writing a new novel. And that’s a really complicated way of saying, my novel’s about boy’s quest for world peace. :D…[Read more]

@jess-penrose Alrighty! Bye!

And I have no idea how much I got in the time that you were here, seeing as you stopped three minutos ago. … But good war anyway. 😀

@jess-penrose 😛 Yeah…maybe now we should start in one minute and go for ten minutes. Sorry. Didn’t see that.

@jess-penrose Oh boy! I haven’t done one of those in a long time! You’re on! 😀

@that_writer_Girl_99 @jess-penrose

I’m on too! Writing my novel.

@daeus Um…. *runs off to grocery store to get lots of ice cream*

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@perfectfifths Ya! Voyager–that’s the one I’ve watched. Who’s your favorite character? 😀

Violators will be required to read The Count Of Monte Cristo.

Not watching something is not a crime. Only not eating ice cream.