Cloaked Mystery

@jonas

Nahim 

Nahim watched Kate march off. He looked Noranay as she put the spear back in its place,

“Does she remind you of someone?” Nora snorted.

“A stuck-up person who thinks she knows everything. And has survived it. I’d like to see her survive a Terror Bomb.” Nahim looked back at Kate.

“She’s similar to me.” Nora stared at…[Read more]

@jonas

You mean this?

@jonas

Nora

“I would be alive! Which I can’t say the same for you!” Nora grabbed her spear from where it was strapped to her back and in less than a second had it aimed at Kate’s chest, keeping a space between them with the spear. Before Nora could do anymore, an armored glove grabbed her spear, pulling it away from Kate using  his superior…[Read more]

@jonas

@jonas

Nora

“That wasn’t exactly my fault.” From behind Nora, where Nahim sat, he grinned leaning back into his chair and crossing his arms. “Zahlin could have just accepted defeat! And that’s beside the point. The point is Mithaln is stronger than you might be able to imagine with your brain!”

@jonas

PLEAD FOR MERCY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@jonas

Are you trying to say that this is my fault? How dare you?

@jonas

Nora

“You act more like a Young One than a lady! An what I’m wearing can save me. I’ve seen entire palaces collapse on people wearing Mithaln and Mithweve, and he sits over there!” Nora gestured with her hand at Nahim. “He is alive.”

@jonas

THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!!!!

@jonas

@jonas

SEE?

@jonas

*evil smile creeps over my face*

@jonas

DON’T SAY THE WORD!!!!!! She’s going to take that as a challenge!

@jonas

I’m going to take a wild chance and give you advice when I have no context…

Unless you think you can pull Grayton off in an interesting way, that makes readers want to read about him, don’t make him the MC. I doubt that helps any.

@jonas

Oh dear, I think I might bring Nahim along…

@jonas

Nora

“I watched my people die around me, I fought in two invasions of my home planet, we’ve been fighting a war since before I can remember! And your spell can’t touch me! I wear Mithaln armor and Mithweve! If you want respect, show it yourself, Young One.”

@jonas

I don’t think your face has the intelligence to carry on a conversation

OH MY GOSH I DIED LAUGHING I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD I WAS CRYING 🤣🤣🤣

Pics aren’t working for me rn! NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! @jonas will be so upset! XD

@jonas

Nora

“Have you ever fought a war? Have you ever led jetpackers into battle? Were you taught the way of the Warrioress since you were little? Do you belong to the Realn Empire, founded ages ago by Emperor Thurston, long may his memory be held? No. I have seen more fire than you, Young One! I shall go away when I feel like it.”

@jonas

So long