@jonas
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Eh, he wouldn’t like anyone doing it, but he wouldn’t kill any of them, and probably not hurt them at all. He ust needs a hard push towards rest.
Nahim literally kept going doing something very stressful for him until he passed out. He just can’t force himself to stop, but other people usually can.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium (I think I forgot to tag you for the first few chapters, sorry!)
Okay, here’s chapter 5.
Chapter 5: Names
The next seven months flew by in a blur.
Sef eagerly helped Neveah with whatever she asked of her, sweeping, washing the dishes, mopping the floor, and all with such vigor that surprised even…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ottoline
“I’m not sure how I can learn,” she bit her lip. “It will be really hard for me…and I’m not sure if you picked the right person to train, I’m pretty slow.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
That’s fine, just pretend Nahim didn’t ask.
When we put that last RP of Nahim’s in the docs, we need to remember to delete his question.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ellis has a similar perspective to protecting people as Nahim does, Nahim never forsakes his friends until either he is dead, or they are dead.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Yeah, not knowing sometimes bothers me, but mostly just when I find out someone’s older.
Glad I’m not alone!
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Beth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Okay. Thanks! I figured but wanted to ask just in case.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
In person, I usually can guess someone’s age and treat them accordingly, but online…I feel really foolish when I discover they’re older.
Like I just discovered @jonas was born in 2006, I’m fourteen, and somehow I’ve always imagined him being that age to (if you take offense, Jonas, none meant and I apologize).
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ottoline
“Scared of learning to defend yourself?” Ellis asked. Ottoline almost laughed. Instead, a silent tear fell down her cheek as she watched the birds flit about outside.
“No,” she said softly. “What if I can’t protect the people I care about? I’m scared that-that they were right, that I am nothing, that I deserved everything the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Nahim will be glad to take on another trainee!
Would it help Ottoline at all to have a crystal sword instead of a normal one?
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @acancello @beth-torres @trailblazer @keilah-h
These are the names I have taken for the regions of Lillen,
Forest region– Silva
Cavern region– Antrum
Swamp region– Palus
Mountain region– Mons
Sky region– Caelum
Tundra region– Glacies
Ocean region– Oceanus
Desert region– Vastus
Volcano…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ottoline
“Does it have to be a sword?” she asked. “I could use a gun, or my bow. I’d like to see how the dragons would react to a gun.” she rattled off, trying to seem defiant, but inside, Ottoline was panicking.
Ellis could never understand, she knew. And what scared her is that she knew he was right, it would be useful if they had o…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I thought so.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ellis was in the middle of talking with Zahlin, but I guess we can just say that that this is after that.
Oh, sorry! My bad XD
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh, ok.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh, I though Ellis left Zahlin.
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Beth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Okay. I think I will do that. Can I write in first person? I’ve tried third and I can if necessary, but I’m not the best at it.
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