Cloaked Mystery

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Same…I would write one…but I kind of have to know what I’m talking about to write one, lol

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Sorry I couldn’t help more! Plotting is just really new to me….so it’s hard to give good advice XD

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The website says that the Hook is the inciting incident (so maybe I plotted wrong, XD). Apparently the First Plot Point is the point of no return, where your character takes action and there’s no going back. It’s the first significant event of the story.

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…lazy. They are then…

Shunned in the most difficult way possible, meaning…

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Any member of the Diffi Cult found guilty of taking the easier and/or more straightforward path is subjected to…

picking up a ball, and putting it back down. The task is so easy that…

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Hmm. Good question. I’m not exactly sure how to explain it, partly because I don’t understand it that well. But from what I understand, the Hook is what grabs the reader’s attention. Like in my story, for example, the “hook” would be when Neveah gives birth to Hanna. It disrupts Sef’s natural world, however, it doesn’t really force her to…[Read more]

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Yeah, that could be interesting. The perception thing I still think if given to the right person with the right mental discipline, they could do a lot if there isn’t so much of a specific form of “power” you receive. Perhaps it could always be intellectual power, or influential power, ect. If that were the case though, if you could give up…[Read more]

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Fair enough. I feel like there could be logical loopholes still to get around that. Like in the case of getting a robotic arm to replace an existing arm, what if you control your perception enough, to say “I give my “flesh arm” for a “metal appendage with these qualities” or something like that. As long as you can convince yourself that it…[Read more]

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Here’s my next chapter… if you have romance, LOOK AWAY lol!

Chapter 6: Raindrops

Lilitu was sitting on the steps, minding his own business, like any sensible person would do.

He was watching the wind sway the trees, listening to their whispers.

Often, he would sit and try to make sense of what…[Read more]

@jonas I have it ready! I’ve just been busy so haven’t been able to rp or anything

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Good night! I should go too, soon

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No name yet

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True.

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Found it!

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Who did nothing?

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Oh, yeah! I’ve got the swamp almost ready and bubbling! Just have to find the one notebook in my messy room and among what feels like hundreds of notebooks…

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Idk! My charrie probably will just avoid straight out telling a lie and straight out telling the truth.he has no open wounds, so unless Queen Silvae mentions he couldn’t see for a minute or so, or Nora or Kate realizes he got hit pretty hard a couple times, they will probably ignore him.

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Woohoo! Let’s almost get our characters killed! SO MUCH FUN!!!!!

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Dragons:

Jonas: tundra/ice, ocean/water

Esther: desert/sand

Sara: mountain/storm

Rae: volcanoes/fire, swamp/gas (and everyone will get nightmares!)

HighScribe: sky/wind

Keilah:  forest/jungle, cavern/earth

No leftover

@jonas

I’m not a fan of these so called “societies.”

what???? How could you NOT be???

I should probably stop talking now

Anyways…am I correct to assume we’re going to the jungle first?