Cloaked Mystery

@hybridlore

Oh, *facepalm*

Nope!
DILL PICKLES ARE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

says the person who’s never had a bread and butter pickle, but we can ignore that, can’t we?

@hybridlore

If bread is hot, and espeically if the butter is a garlic butter.

@the_lost-journal

Andrew is older than me by eight months.

@the_lost-journal

Pretty close!! I’m fifteen, born July, 2009.

@the_lost-journal

guess my age ✨✨🙃

@highscribeofaetherium

yeahhh 🥹🥹

I edited her a little so that she’s half Azer, half Aquino.

im playing around with her a little…

so like, normally pure races don’t mix. For example, if a pure Pitt and a pure azer have kids, the child will either be pure Pitt or pure Azer.

ottoline is half Aquino, half Azer, because she had a rare genet…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Poor Ottoline 🙁

Does she have fire powers now??

Here’s a scene I just wrote

TRIGGER WARNING–it’s a little dark…

And it’s kind of not supposed to make sense since it’s a flashback XD btw so if it’s confusing, that’s why.

“Ssstand up, girl,” Tigin held his whip high. Ottoline curled into herself, trembling on the cold floor.

She knew what was going to happen next.

There was no esc…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

AWWW TYSMMMM!!! <333

💜💜💜💜💜

@the _lost-journal

Oh boy

I CAN’T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

To be honest, I wasn’t sure what to think when you first introduced this topic but now, I’m so glad this exists!

@keilah-h

LOLLLLL

Should I be glad none of my characters ticked you off……?

 

actually it’d be funnier if they did…..

SOLDIER! MEDIC! YOUR TIME HAS COME, DO SOMETHING ANNOYING!!

LOL

Though, I don’t think i could kill any of your characters, except maybe Medic, because he’s just…creepy.

Soldier is a ticking time bomb that he himself pushed…[Read more]

@acancello (if you’re still on, you should look at this) @anyone-else

Here’s an Ottoline board!!!!

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you so much!!! <333

@hybridlore

It’s hilarious because it doesn’t make sense. XDXD I love the twins lol

@keilah-h

It’s from the How to Train Your Dragon shows, the episodes.

It’s a quote from Ruffnut and Tuffnut when they were talking about their Uncle Fenris (one of their numerous made-up relatives)

The full quote is:

“‘Fenris, Fenris, tall and fair, who did you let braid your hair?’ That was the rhyme we youngsters use to say to him. And he…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Aw thank you so much!!!!

I use Canva!!!

@keilah-h

The pure Andromedans appear exactly human except for color differences, but the only pictures I could find of people with blue skin, hair and eyes were like anime pics and I don’t like using cartoon photos for my boards XDXD

So like Lilitu has some blue birthmarks and blue streaks…[Read more]

@jonas

Thank you again for your help!!!

@the_lost-journal

lol, really?

Yep. ever since my mom and I had a flour fight and she said I should put it in a story.

Oh… the reason why I was asking it is….. *sigh* things don’t really go his way this chapter… at least for a part of it.

(I think you are going to grow a hatred, or less a disliking, to a certain rude character…)

Oh dear……[Read more]

@jonas

whoaaaa

that was a lot 😅😅

thank you for all your help, it is appreciated!!

however, I’m not looking for so much of a detailed critique as I have in the past. This is still a really rough draft and I know there’s a lot of messy sentences and chapters. I’m mostly looking for critiques to see if the pacing is good and if it makes more…[Read more]

@linis-smallprint

yes, this is the same book that you started before. I did revise it a lot though 😂😂😅