Cloaked Mystery

I wouldn’t call myself a source as far as plots and scenes but do have one thing to say

Additionally, I feel like I’m forcing my characters to do something without actually letting them decide

This sounds like you don’t know your characters well enough. Maybe work a little more on character development and getting comfy in your character cloak. W…[Read more]

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So… the first draft of Guardian Angels I literally started writing while waiting for a piano lesson, and I had no idea what I was doing. I still have no idea honestly. Apparently, my idea of ‘first draft’ is wing it.

And I currently only get motivation from my characters and someone very special so I have a lot of unfinished…[Read more]

@koshka

Okay, so we’re going to wait for it become day?

@koshka

Do you want a description of Rax and Ben?

@koshka

Alright! Sounds good!

@koshka @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Do have an idea of where I may insert Rax and Ben somewhere? (Don’t worry Ellette, I’ll make sure that Rax doesn’t burnanate everything XD)

@ellette-giselle

Another sign find. Immediately thought of you XD

Oh, and Ben

…so I may be a lit late on asking this, but should I just remove Rax?

@grcr

Wow, that is a great improvement, good job 👍

@the_lost-journal

You should also go off teachings from the saints.

The Bible is the WORD OF GOD!!!!! How could anything people say be superior to that?

I understand that God gives people special revelations too, but they won’t contradict the Bible. As Christians we need to respect the Bible as the ultimate authority.

Plus, the Bible requires two…

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@the_lost-journal

(I am not bias or anything…)

…Right… XD

@the_lost-journal

Lol, someone is excited XD

It actually looks pretty nice.

@the_lost-journal

… Sorry I seam kinda rude, I am still annoyed at Rae…

I forgive you, but please don’t let it happen again, there is no reason to blow up at someone you can’t see. And please let that go with her, she never meant to harm you. Holding grudges will not help you as a person, or even a follower of Christ. Forgive as Christ for…[Read more]

…and Whaley said the same thing relating Tabitha… sorry

@ellette-giselle

Thanks!

Oh, sorry, I just realized @the_lost-journal that Sara said the same thing I said, sorry

@ellette-giselle

It’s a camp up in up-state New York and I’m going to be working there the whole summer.

Please don’t take these as me criticizing you. As a fellow Christian, it is my job to help you come to a better understanding of God and his word, that is what God has called all of us to do.