Cloaked Mystery

@artist-peoples-idk

Would anyone be interested in starting an art/illustration critique forum? Just curious, I think it might be fun, but I want to know if other people would want to before I create a new topic. Idk, just an idea. If nobody likes the idea that’s fine.

I can share more of what I had in mind if anyone would like.

@whalekeeper

Mateo

The figure kept his arms on his guitar. “Do these guys who blow stuff up bother you often?” The figure like the winged muchacho, and for some reason he felt inclined to help him if these others were a problem to him.

@ellette-giselle do you want me to repost mine?

@ellette-giselle

I did respond, but I didn’t get a notification either.

@whalekeeper

I’m not subscribed, and I didn’t get any notification when Ellette tagged me.

@whalekeeper

Mateo

The figure smiled, a devilish creepy smile. He admired the guy who seemed to have no fear of him. He starred at him for a while, finishing his melody with one last chilling chord. “I blow stuff up. You are curious, muchacho.”

@whalekeeper

Mateo

The figure stopped walking, but never stopped playing his guitar in its minor key. He lifted his head slightly to meet the gaze of the fellow who was asking him questions. The figure’s face wasn’t even a face, but it was a skull, with two blue eyes in the center, looking dead into the interrogator’s eyes. He began to speak in…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

lol, I think I’m going to keep him on the main floor to try creep out as many people as possible 😁

@ellette-giselle

…Where is Rory?

New charrie!!!

Mateo

Tall and cover in black, the figure wore a black sombrero type hat and ominously played a white guitar. His melody could send chills up the bravest of heart. He hung his head low, making it so that no one could see his face. He walked into the school grounds, the essence of evil hanging around him.

Who wants to talk…[Read more]

@koshka @loopylin

Rax and Ben

Rax didn’t like Syph’s answer and wanted to make amends, “I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, I just thought you were confused, so I thought it would be best if you just came and watched. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”

@ellette-giselle I know, Rax is weird

@koshka @loopylin

Rax and Ben

Rax laughed, he enjoyed the conversation between an ignorant fish person and two twins who barely agreed on anything. Ben was also enjoying the conversation from the background.

Rax spoke up, “Syph, how about you just watch this time around.”

@koshka

Mexican explosive addict who is an undead skeleton kind of trouble

Can I cause trouble with a new charrie? Pleeeeaase

@esther-c

Sorry I’m just now getting to this!!!!

My main critique would be that you spend a lot of time on dialogue. I kind of feel like we just got thrown into the story and all we know about the characters is because of what they say. Maybe breaking up some dialogue and really showing us who they characters are would help…it kind of feels l…[Read more]

@loopylin @koshka

Rax and Ben

Rax was excited when he heard Eddie’s response. “Great! Wonderful!” You could never see a smile as big on anyone’s face as on Rax’s. He was filled with joy, for he liked dancing, even though he had only danced formally once or twice, but that made him more excited that he would dance formally again. And to top it…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I wrote it seriously, but looking back at it it’s kinda funny, lol. I’m glad you found it funny

@koshka

By the way, Syph has no problem dancing with girls. He just is trying to understand how it would work if you weren’t in competition.

Syph is so funny, lol

@the_lost-journal

tbh, I am also confused about the teachings  XD And I do wonder why. But also I get this feeling of fullness after going to confession. So whatever it is, I think I am going to stick to it! Also  thanks for the prayers. I won’t be able to get back to anyone for a while btw. I AM GOING SKIING! ^o^

I agree, it does help to tell oth…[Read more]

@loppylin @anyoneelse

Also, I don’t think I remember what your characters look like either?

Here’s a pre-written description of Rax:

Rax was a tall, tan skinned man. His eyes were light blue, filled with emotion. He had long grey hair often tied into a manbun. His clothes were baggy, pants and shirt, but he wore no shoes. On his arms were t…

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I like fire, so I have a MC who is a pyromancer :}