Cloaked Mystery

@the_lost-journal

lol

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you for the critique! You gave me some very helpful feedback.

Just a couple things to address so you don’t have to keep wondering

The second and third sentences seem to imply that Max’s only non-human feature is that his eyes are full of emotion. That doesn’t seem like a necessarily inhuman trait. Do I understand cor…

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@ellette-giselle

RAE THIS IS INCREDIBLE!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!! YOU ARE AN INSANELY AMAZING AUTHORESS! Oh wow! This is so good! The characters, the world, the personalities, the dialogue, the description!!!!!  I COULD GO ON FOREVER!!!!!!!!!

Wow, thanks.

I wasn’t expecting that enthuastic of a response.

Hopefully notifications work for you…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium

Third story! This should fill in a few gaps from the second

 
A Visitor in the Night
“’Suuuuuuch is…the faaaaaaate of the eh-vil–”

“Not /eh/. Look, there’s a vowel after the /v/, so it’s…C’mon, you’re almost done,” A mother coaxed her young son.

“/Ee/! Ee-vil-do-er.’ Evil-doer, right?” Simeon…[Read more]

@rae

I haven’t read the second part yet, but I’ll critique the first section first.

Keep in mind that this is all my opinion, and you can ignore what you want.

Your first sentence is good. I don’t have any critique for it.

The second sentence has a couple things.

Halfbreed of man and elf, Max lacked the pointed ears and the knifelike sharp…

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@the_lost-journal

It is supposed to say they usually hang out at their own house, and are not seen out in the open lol!

WHAT IS THISSSS
IT’S EVEN MORE ACURRATE
AHHH I LOVE IT SO MUCH

THANK YOU SO MUCHHHH

@theduckator

Idkkkk

Personally I don’t think it’s wrong to say it’s not a religion…

But we also have different denominations and my church has done sermons where my pastor has taught that Christianity is a “relationship, not a religion” so it could just be how I was raised. I respect your opinion and I’m not going to judge you or anything j…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

HOW ARE THESE SO ACCURATE

you literally just described me…

It doesn’t have many friends

the magic potato just called me out….XDXD

ahhh i love it thank youuuuuu

*screams excitedly* I GOT A POTATOOOOOOOOOO

@beth-torres

LOL! Who needs a braining brain when ya got a jumbled mess of chaos (If that makes any sense)? 😂 I know I have it.

EXACTLY

SOMEBODY GETS ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOL. I lost a funny meme but it was so relatable. It had to do with not having touched any WIP since the cold winter of 1878… I think that’s me rn😂

That was me this fall. Idk wha…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Honestly, when I write scenes I feel nothing.

Which makes me feel really bad, especially when other people tell me when they write hard scenes they cry a lot, and I’ve never really cried like that. The only time I can remember tearing up is when Sef was getting abused by Iver in a scene I wrote like last year…and it still hurts my…[Read more]

@koshka

I showed that scene to one of my friends, and her exact words were:

“Livia and Marcurious have never been more annoying, and Aubrielle has never been more relatable”.

It was so funny lolll

am I the only one who loves books yet still dog ears the pages??

like i’m so protective of my books yet dog eared pages don’t bother me….

I mean, maybe it’s because I love books so much that I’m too desperate to mark my page right away than go find a bookmark, idk…

@the_lost-journal

MAGIC POTATO, HAVOC POTATO, WHAT AM I???

ahhh i’m so excited yayyyyy

@the_lost-journal

Sorry… I just wanted to use that meme template really badly!

It’s totally fine. I’m glad to see everyone enjoying themselves making memes about me lol

Also, I found the typo funny

@loopylin

Lol, I was looking at the older stuff and I got a kick out of those even though I don’t know any of the characters

I’m going to try one (@rae might like this)

Rax: Repeat after me, Rax
Ben: Rax
Rax: Rax
Ben: Rax
Rax: Ok, am I your friend?
Ben: Of course, Master Rax!
Rax: *face-palms*

@the_lost-journal

Both, hence, “Both counts”

@keilah-h

Sniper’s Australian right?

@the_lost-journal

LOL on both counts

@rae

When the scanner is running again, I have a couple drawings in Baron’s art style that I drew tonight

HUZZAH!!!

(only took me like four hours)

They will be greatly appreciated then ☺️

@the_lost-journal

For me its more like let my parents read my WIP or draw 25. I’m just scared that they won’t like what I write.

And seriously!!!! Whaley, Ellette, my Andrew, @stephie and now you too!!!!!!?

@raxforge @ellette-giselle

When the scanner is running again, I have a couple drawings in Baron’s art style that I drew tonight (only…[Read more]