Cloaked Mystery

This is the language we came up with…kind of:

All the consonants you gave:

t l n m r k s p sh b f v z d j g w th

Vowels:

let’s just say it’s English vowels for now.

These are the “swears” we came up with:
Scist (Scisto)

Dissar (Dissaros)

And idk what else…XD

@thearcaneaxiom

hahaha

okay

let me go back real quick then…

@savannah_grace2009

Hold your horses now😅 We can do something like Tlavian if you want, it’s just the first thing that came to my head, but does it actually match the Andromedan language we worked out some time back? If not, we can either change the langauge, or change the word.

@thearcaneaxiom

Okay, Tlavian it is! XD why are you so good at this!?!?!

@ellette-giselle

I actually do show a scene of the kids working in the next chapter, and then a couple chapters after that…just wait XD

Okay, good ideas!

I just don’t know how to reveal it all…because those ideas sound so good but when I try to do stuff like that it feels either rushed or too slow 😭😭😭 I’ll figure it out somehow lol

And…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I guess some of both? Like what the Andromedans would call Him, as well as new names for what the humans could call Him?

I’m assuming we’re still just thinking about the Andromedans alone, but I mean phonetically in their tongue, vs translated titles. For example, a name for Christ in Andromedan could be Tlavian (I don’t…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Chase

Chase looked at her shyly out of the corner of his eye. “I-it’s g-good.” He faced Sef again, his eyebrows growing close together as he concentrated. The color of his eyes warped and somewhat faded away, forming into the picture of a woman with curly brown hair down to her shoulders, a pretty smile and green eyes. “T-that’s her.”

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @thesahdow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings

Here are my thoughts and my judging!

Ellette: When I first saw your drawing, my immediate thought was “This is gonna be hard to beat.” You portrayed the hair and the soft features really nicely. You did put the scale on the wrong side, and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thank you sooo much, do you have any thoughts/ comments??? I’d love to hear them!

@thearcaneaxiom

Okay great!!!

I guess some of both? Like what the Andromedans would call Him, as well as new names for what the humans could call Him?

@linus-smallprint

Oooh! You use Reedsy too?!?!

I’M NOT THE ONLY ONE!!!
How do you like it??

@ellette-giselle

Ok!

@ellette-giselle

Oh man, tell me aboit it! My friend is still holding hostage some of my old drawings and I am literally trying to make her promise not to display them at my wedding  someday. lol.

Lolll XD

I’m best at one person. Haven’t tried many couples but I can if you want. I don’t really do action scenes.

Would you prefer pencil or digita…[Read more]

@rae

Yeahh… I don’t think I’m going to be able to finish. Sorry 😅

@ellette-giselle

*stares in horror at super cringey old drawings*

*dies*

🫣🫣

Sure. However expect it to look n.o.t.h.i.n.g. like the nightmares you see on the previous pages 😅

I legit cannot look at those things without cringing so bad.

@savannah_grace2009

Let me think….yEs PlEaSe HeLp Me 😭😭😭

If you’re busy though, that’s fine no worries!

Fair enough, lol! I can help a little. So are you thinking about Andromedan language names, or English titles, or both?

@hybridlore

Thank you soooo much!!! <3

@anyone-who-wishes-to-read

Chapter 7

Rage

Pain.

A distant, ever present throbbing at the base of Lilitu’s neck.

On your feet, he warned himself, or you’re dead. He put his weight on his bad foot and screamed in agony before he could stifle it.

Blue blood oozed from his numerous cuts, the edges searing like fire.

Lilitu scrambled back to…[Read more]

@jonas

you want an em dash instead of a hyphen

Noted. Thank you!!!

Maybe this will be explained at some point, but it isn’t clear why the Paynes being moved to this new district would mean she doesn’t see them anymore, did they just move to completely different areas?

She doesn’t see them anymore because both she and them are always working, the…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Let me think….yEs PlEaSe HeLp Me 😭😭😭

If you’re busy though, that’s fine no worries!