Cloaked Mystery

@rae

Wow that’s crazyyyy

It doesn’t matter to me honestly!

@savannah_grace2009

So…I have an option…what if Chase’s aunt, who will taking guardianship of him, comes to here to try and bond with Chase and we deal with that? Or do you want to do something else? I’m good with whatever you would like to do, that’s just an option

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I did have to rp as Sef a few times, but I tried to avoid it, and when I did rp, i think I mostly remained in her POV faithfully 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

Um…WHAT

Yeah, um…after he fought Jep he was taken to the hospital off-screen. Actually, after all the accidents that have happened  the foster system for his country might take him away from the school…though, Chase might just go rouge if they try that cuz he won’t be able to go back to the Marshalls cuz of st…[Read more]

@rae

Um…WHAT

@esther-c

yes that would be funnn!

This sounds fun!

@jonas

Yep 😎

Until WaT is released.

@jonas

days.

6

@the_lost-journal

But I was thinking… Maybe I… uhh… unofficially quit KP?

I’ll miss you on here, but I hope it will help you to have one less thing to stress about!

Wow, your story is interesting, can’t wait for Part 4!

@savannah_grace2009

Sure!

Um…though Chase is in the hospital rn…

@rae @esther-c

I really miss this RP…is it still going??? And is there any way that I can bring Sef and Liv back…? 👀👀👀

@trailblazer

That is so cool!!!! That sounds amazing!!!!!

@loopylin

Thank you so much <333

Yesssss! I ate too much food lol

@jonas

Oh okay!

That’s not the reason anymore I guess 😂 I actually forgot I said that…a lot has changed lol

That makes sense though, I understand what you’re saying!

Oh, and as for why I changed the ending instead of them abandoning Lilitu…

There are a couple reasons why I did that. Maybe they’re not good reasons lol but I’m going to leave it, at least for now so I can play with it. I think it will make the story make a little bit more sense  in the future so I’m just going to leave it for now.

@hybridlore

Thank youuu!

@highscribe

I think this is really good! You have some really nice prose.

Thank you so much!

I corrected the things you suggested and you’re right, I think it will flow a lot better! Thank you so much, you have been very helpful! <3

@jonas

I think I asked before why he insisted on this, and you said that it was to sweeten the deal for Kaden. Personally, I feel like you should show Kaden as having more hesitation if this is going to work. To me, it seems like they have already made up their minds to become Pythonos. Sure, they’re scared, but to me, it still doesn’t convey a s…

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@jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Oh my goodness you guys are so good!!!!

I actually have noticed a couple of the things you’ve said before but for some reason I forgot to change them… *facepalm* I’ll go fix them now before I forget again lol!