@jonas
Active 4 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I don’t think Krenna has introduced herself to anyone yet. Good luck getting her to!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, I’m not sure if we want whole armies being brought with a character. Cole and Callipsa would both work well, since their rivals are here too, but if you don’t want to do them since you’re using them in two RPs already, that’s fine. John or Styx would work well too.
Not sure if we would want the three Sanses, but if other people a…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Okay. Is Nahim?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
None of my villains are available to attack Zahlin, btw. They all are kind of withdrawing. Maybe it could be @savannah_grace2009‘s new villain? Kian also hasn’t done anything yet. I also don’t think @calyhuge‘s villains have appeared either.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Krenna
Krenna crossed her arms in disgust as several more fools joined her fool companions.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Okay whatever. It’s whoever’s supposed to be there. If I got it wrong just pretend I said whoever it actually was.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Okay, so it looks like Fennin should be there instead of Nahim.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ellis
Ellis headed out of the main hall. There was much less smoke, and he could breathe easier.
He continued running in the direction of the men’s room, the last place he knew Fennin had been.
Suddenly, someone appeared ahead of him from around a corner. It was Dlek.
”You!” Ellis shouted.
Dlek whipped around and raised his sword…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I didn’t feel bad about it.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Wow, now I don’t feel bad about having five!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
To continue what I was saying, can we just let this wrap up naturally, instead of just saying the fire’s out? A lot of our characters were struggling against it, so I don’t want to just end that abruptly. I felt like we were really rushing through this whole scene.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Hang on! I think some of our characters were still dealing with the fire. Can we wait a bit before we just end this scene?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ellis
”No, she didn’t,” said Ellis. “That’s…not good. Get everyone you can out of here. I’m going to find them.”
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Mmmm…chai…
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Happy thanksgiving!!!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Btw, there are some generic Gilganing soldiers here too, so Snake could just be attacking them.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ellis
Ellis dodged aside as a section of the roof fell. When he looked up, his opponent was gone.
We’ve got to get out of her.
He coughed, his head feeling light from all the smoke. Who was still in here?
He had seen Kari back herself into a corner, and Zahlin was around here somewhere. He was pretty sure Ottoline and Hugo had escaped on a ho…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@keilah_h
That’s funny, I was imaging Snake as being roughly human-sized this whole time!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Kate
A spear struck her opponent in the side. He immediately, pulled it free and turned it on Kate.
Kate created a shield in the nick of time. For a moment, she and her opponent were locked together, he trying to push through the wall of red light. The the shield burst, throwing him backwards.
There was a crash as a piece of the ceiling caved…[Read more]
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IT WAS SO GOOD…but too much caffeine…i got kind of hyper lol