@jonas
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Except the ones who did nothing.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I think all the characters need a rest after everything that happened.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I haven’t worked on my dragons at all yet, but luckily for me, I don’t think any of them are going to be too early.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
If not, we could just do swamp first.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yep, jungle is first on the hit list.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Does someone need to convince him again?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Btw, do you have the forest dragon? I think so, but I forgot again.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yep, so is Zash. There’s basically no way he would defect, unless the good guys were literally holding the power to just destroy him and the other villains.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I’m not a fan of these so called “societies.” Plus, we already did make him take a break, (briefly)…sort of.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Alright then! Koshtin sure didn’t do a thorough background check on the “villains” he pulled in.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Anyone ever worry that someone will join the forum with the tag ‘everyone’?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@everyone
It’s probably almost time for the quest to begin, right? Since they got attacked, they need to get going quick! They just need to take care of the fire and that nasty Styx.
I thought of a good in universe solution to Lane, Flaz, and Leon. We say that they’re staying behind in case of another attack, and to help train the Lillenings.…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
How do you guys come up with this stuff? IT’S SO GOOD! I could never. I should hire you peoples to make magic systems for me, lol
Thanks! It isn’t easy for me. This one has been marinating in my brain for a long time, and it’s still only half-baked. Like if you asked me to just come up with one right now, I couldn’t come up wi…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium
This is a magic system idea that has been floating around in my head for a while. It’s pretty rough, so far, but here’s what I’ve figured out.
The basic premise is that you make sacrifices to gain power. (Not like ritualistic sacrifices. I just mean giving something up.)
Here are a few basic rules.
- The…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
I don’t expect any of you to have all the answers! Like I said, I think I’ll try to find something on plotting series.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
True, but there still has to be some overarching plot structure. For example, there is no inciting incident really in the second or third books.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Krenna
Krenna deftly sliced through the arrow that Fracture was hanging from.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, three-act structure sounds way too complicated and intricate to be helpful, but the plot points seem like they might be useful. I don’t think I’ve seen that specific way to organize a story before.
Maybe I should try to find something specifically on plotting series.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Thanks, I’ll take a look at those. One additional difficulty is that I’m working with a series, so plotting that is a bit different.
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