@jonas
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Ellis
They were finally on their way.
Ellis sat atop his dark elk, Shadowstep. He had never ridden an elk before, but he could ride a horse. How different could it be?
Ah, said Conviction. Doesn’t it feel good to get out of that cramped, ugly, smoky, charred palace and get on the road towards certain doom?
“Very optimistic,” said Ellis.
I k…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Encouraging Each Other in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I think I think about my writing in a different way than most people, because I don’t usually struggle with this stuff. I write because I like it (not the process, so much, but the results) not because I want to publish. I don’t think about publishing really, I just think it would be awesome to have written a book. Pub…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
No, I haven’t. I guess I’ll take a look.
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, I get it.
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
I got a notification, so I saw it. Am I right in thinking that his weapons are on the right side and the pad where he gives commands to his armor is on the left?
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh, and what shape are the crystal swords? Are they shaped like a normal blade, or is the blade more jagged and rock-like in shape?
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
I think you said Nora’s armor is blue, red, and white. What color is Nahim’s?
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Nahim’s is a grey/black with carton like lightning bolts of bright yellow centers and almost orange outlines.
When I get the chance, the watercolor shows you that stuff.-
He also has many armor markings…I tried to explain them, and I accidentally deleted it so, I’ll sketch them. I would wait a little to draw him, he’s kinda complicated.
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I got a notification, so I saw it. Am I right in thinking that his weapons are on the right side and the pad where he gives commands to his armor is on the left?
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Alright, great!
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
How big is his sword? And what does it look like?
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Let’s see…
(Hope that works)
Its proportions are similar to that. It’s about 4’… 4”? Maybe? Long.
I’ll get some more detailed descriptions later.
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Okay.
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 5 months ago
Okay. What types of clothing does she wear?
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I really don’t know XD I guess I need to do some more worldbuilding! I see her as wearing a tan tee-shirt and some kind of leggings, but idk. Sorry! You can just draw her like that for now, I guess?
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Okay.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
…vote on several factions and wage a succession war…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yours was good too. We’ll see what everyone else thinks.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I think @calyhuge’s characters were still trying to capture Styx.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Curse you, KP lag!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Uh oh
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
…voting on the monarch’s decisions. The monarch then dictates his decisions regarding the outcome of the vote. This proceeds infinitely until…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
What do we still need to finish up before they can go, and who needs to RP to get that done?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
If we keep causing chaos, we’ll never get anywhere. We should probably wait till they head to the jungle, which we’re almost ready to do.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Non-Linear worldbuilding collaboration challenge! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
The Diffi Cult is ruled in the most difficult manner possible, by…
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Shaped normally. His is the style that can both slice and puncture.
As far as sides go, Nahim is skilled with a sword with both his left and his right, though prefers his right. Yes, he would hang it usually on the right but sometimes it is on the left. His holster is on the right, and set to be out of the way.
As far as commands go… He usually…[Read more]
Yeah, I get it.