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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Izre
Izre was a bit disappointed that Svlys hadn’t taken offense.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
So what would happen after that? Would Snake just snap out of it, or pass out?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
I didn’t notice any!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Izre
Izre looked eagerly between the woman and Igua, her tail lashing back and forth, hoping a fight would break out. That would be entertaining.
Humans!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Izre
“Me neither,” said Izre. “I’m getting bored.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
…Oh yeah, and furthermore the pleasant aspects of some of her splits weren’t necessarily part of Krenna originally, but developed independently.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Yeah, sure! I’m not sure how much luck the other will have knocking Snake out, so that might be their only hope.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Lol. Err… I’m not exactly sure how it works, but I would say something like that happened. She is missing a bit of her old personality, but not a super big part. I would say her ornery, over-aggressive personality became exaggerated over time after that.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Krenna
Krenna crossed her arms and leaned against the wall.
Bo-o-o-o-ring!
Loop was looking eagerly between the people talking and furiously scribbling notes on an imaginary page with an imaginary pen—she said it helped her remember things.
Ops was standing by impassively. He always looked a bit creepy when he did that.
Whisp was gone. Off e…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Izre
Izre strongly considered mauling the young woman, and possibly the other six for good measure, but on second thought, patience is a virtue. She sat back as the young woman turned to start yelling at another guy who must have showed up just before Izre.
Humans were quite amusing.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Izre
Izre looked at the snappy young woman with amusement. When she had asked ‘what are you?’ she hadn’t been looking for their species, but whatever.
“I used to be a human,” she responded. “But that was thousands of years ago. What I am now does not concern you, youngling. I want answers! And I am going to get them if I have to tear each of you apart!”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Well, Kate already tried to knock him out with a concussive blast to the face, and that didn’t work. What could they do that would be more forceful than that? They could also hunt down the furry lizard and kill it.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oh.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
What you just wrote sounded like Svlys was reacting to Fracture screaming that they were being attacked, which was in response to Izre, but then she was talking to Igua, as though she was reacting to him showing up.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
@highscribeofaehterium
Fracture was reacting to Izre, not Igua. Or is what you just wrote before that?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Oops. I just realized in my last RP, I said there were 8 people. For some reason I was counting Dyke! Should say 7.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
(I forgot to mention Izre has a bit of an accent, but it’s subtle. Mainly rolled ‘r’s, longer ‘s’s, and a very slight bit of a ‘v’ sound in her ‘w’s.)
Izre
She was in an unlit stone corridor.
What is this?
She crept slowly down the hallway, making practically no sound. She sniffed the air. Humans.
Pretty soon she could hear them. It sounded…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
Btw, are your characters separate from the main group?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 5 months ago
Is this all one language then, or is there room for diversification. I think that it can all be rationalized as cohesive, though I noticed not only Greek names, but also traces from languages like French.
These are mostly all Arvendoran names, but some might be imported. For most of the 20,000 year period that these come from,…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 5 months ago
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