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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
What he said literally means “welcome back from death.” That’s a common greeting for someone who just suffered a bad injury.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Ellis
“Snake almost killed you,” Ellis told Ottoline flatly. “Endeson odon eld nidir. You feeling alright?”
The company sat around a fire. They had decided to make camp after the attack.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Go to options, go to proofing. There should be a button that says autocorrect options, which will take you into a place where you can do that.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@beth-torres I don’t think they do, but I think it was riding an elk on its own, so they must know it’s more intelligent than a normal cat.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
It won’t be easy XD, but it isn’t going to be a super common sound, so it shouldn’t be too much of a hassle. In Word, you can set up autocorrect options, so I can just have it autocorrect those words.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Okay, thanks! Would it work to find a ‘j’ with an accent of some sort above it to represent the French J?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Yeah, it can be night. I was already thinking that the next scene should be the main group camping for the night.
I don’t have any “critter” ideas, but it could just be a wolf or something if you want.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
His headache is probably better, because I think it’s been a day or so since the scene with the fire.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
I gotta go too, bye!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Izre
Izre didn’t respond, figuring that was a better way to make him prove it. She smiled internally as the man leading the way asked Klethen about ‘Them.’ They were all suspicious of him now–she had him cornered!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Izre
Izre stared at him a moment.
“Prove it.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Izre
Izre didn’t know what she had expected to see, but the completely black eye seemed a good indication that he was evil. She tensed, preparing to attack him. Hmm… maybe she should make sure.
“Why is your eye like that?” she demanded.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Izre
“Of course not!”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Izre
He definitely knew he was on to her. Time to take drastic measures… Well, not super drastic. She wasn’t ready to kill him yet.
“Why are you wearing an eyepatch?” she demanded.
She smiled to herself. She had successfully outmaneuvered him. He was going to be exposed!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Izre
“It’s Izre!” she snapped, suspiciously. Could he read minds? Did he know she was on to him? “And as for what I am, I’m afraid I can’t say. Some people have called me a gargoyle, or a grotesque. However, the first is inaccurate, and the second is offensive.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Izre
Izre glared at Klethen from behind. Was she the only one who thought we was suspicious. This show of politeness was clearly an attempt to appear inconspicuous. And what was up with the eyepatch? What was he hiding. Izre wouldn’t have been surprised if he was the one who pulled them all here. She contemplated jumping on him from behind and e…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I have another question. So I noticed that the letter ‘C’ never makes an ‘s’ sound, but always a ‘K’ sound. Logically, that would mean that between C and K, only one is necessary. But I don’t like the looks of a lot of the words if I change them to the other, and some of them are real names, like Cadmus, which I would rather not…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Krenna
Krenna just glared at him and turned away.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I’m doing what you suggested with finding consonant and vowel sounds. Do you happen to know how to write the sound that the ‘j’ in Eojold makes, phonetically? (It’s pronounced like the ‘g’ at the end of ‘garage’ or ‘sabotage.’) I can’t find any info online.
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