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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Izre
Izre strongly considered mauling the young woman, and possibly the other six for good measure, but on second thought, patience is a virtue. She sat back as the young woman turned to start yelling at another guy who must have showed up just before Izre.
Humans were quite amusing.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Izre
Izre looked at the snappy young woman with amusement. When she had asked ‘what are you?’ she hadn’t been looking for their species, but whatever.
“I used to be a human,” she responded. “But that was thousands of years ago. What I am now does not concern you, youngling. I want answers! And I am going to get them if I have to tear each of you apart!”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Well, Kate already tried to knock him out with a concussive blast to the face, and that didn’t work. What could they do that would be more forceful than that? They could also hunt down the furry lizard and kill it.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Oh.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
What you just wrote sounded like Svlys was reacting to Fracture screaming that they were being attacked, which was in response to Izre, but then she was talking to Igua, as though she was reacting to him showing up.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
@highscribeofaehterium
Fracture was reacting to Izre, not Igua. Or is what you just wrote before that?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Oops. I just realized in my last RP, I said there were 8 people. For some reason I was counting Dyke! Should say 7.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
(I forgot to mention Izre has a bit of an accent, but it’s subtle. Mainly rolled ‘r’s, longer ‘s’s, and a very slight bit of a ‘v’ sound in her ‘w’s.)
Izre
She was in an unlit stone corridor.
What is this?
She crept slowly down the hallway, making practically no sound. She sniffed the air. Humans.
Pretty soon she could hear them. It sounded…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Btw, are your characters separate from the main group?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 months ago
Is this all one language then, or is there room for diversification. I think that it can all be rationalized as cohesive, though I noticed not only Greek names, but also traces from languages like French.
These are mostly all Arvendoran names, but some might be imported. For most of the 20,000 year period that these come from,…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Yeah, I don’t see you could play it that the person on top of the pyramid liked all of the people at the base equally. At least a love triangle seems sort of plausible, but honestly, when do you ever see that in real life?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
A love-square would be completely different. It’s the version of the love-triangle where everyone is happy in the end.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
I’ve never even heard of a love pyramid, but I think I get what it would be.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
I’ll vote for Igua
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Why are they even called that? They aren’t necessarily triangular—it’s any figure that can be formed by three points connected by two lines. It could be represented as a straight line! So stupid.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
(Ack! It deleted when I tried to edit!)
@highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae@calyhugeI’m adding a second character to this RP. Hopefully it will help get it running smoothly again.
Izre
Izre (pronounced ‘eese-RAY’. The ‘r’ is rolled a bit) is a large dragonesque stone creature. On all fours, the top of her back comes up to about 4 f…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
@hughscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae @calyhuge
I’m adding a second character to this RP. Hopefully it will help get it running smoothly again.
Izre
Izre (pronounced ‘eese-RAY’. The ‘r’ is rolled a bit) is a large dragonesque stone creature. On all fours, the top of her back comes up to about 4 feet. Standing on her hind legs, she…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Injuries are not gonna matter too much, since Kate can heal serious injuries nigh instantly (though a limited amount), and Katonia and Brian have a stone that  heals unlimitedly.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Magic exists.
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