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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Izre
“Of course not!”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Izre
He definitely knew he was on to her. Time to take drastic measures… Well, not super drastic. She wasn’t ready to kill him yet.
“Why are you wearing an eyepatch?” she demanded.
She smiled to herself. She had successfully outmaneuvered him. He was going to be exposed!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Izre
“It’s Izre!” she snapped, suspiciously. Could he read minds? Did he know she was on to him? “And as for what I am, I’m afraid I can’t say. Some people have called me a gargoyle, or a grotesque. However, the first is inaccurate, and the second is offensive.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Izre
Izre glared at Klethen from behind. Was she the only one who thought we was suspicious. This show of politeness was clearly an attempt to appear inconspicuous. And what was up with the eyepatch? What was he hiding. Izre wouldn’t have been surprised if he was the one who pulled them all here. She contemplated jumping on him from behind and e…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 months ago
I have another question. So I noticed that the letter ‘C’ never makes an ‘s’ sound, but always a ‘K’ sound. Logically, that would mean that between C and K, only one is necessary. But I don’t like the looks of a lot of the words if I change them to the other, and some of them are real names, like Cadmus, which I would rather not…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Krenna
Krenna just glared at him and turned away.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 months ago
I’m doing what you suggested with finding consonant and vowel sounds. Do you happen to know how to write the sound that the ‘j’ in Eojold makes, phonetically? (It’s pronounced like the ‘g’ at the end of ‘garage’ or ‘sabotage.’) I can’t find any info online.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
No, that’s fine!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Krenna
“Because it’s cold on the surface, idiot!” Krenna snapped. “I don’t care if you don’t like my logic. And it’s your problem if you want to think we’re all about to die!”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Krenna
“Well, that’s your problem,” Krenna snapped. “What are you so scared of anyway? And if you don’t live on the surface or underground, where do you live on your world?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Krenna
“We’re not on my world,” she shrugged. “We live underground there. It would hardly be fair if we were on yours.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Ellis
Ellis slammed his sword back into its sheath, glancing around. Ottoline was slumped limply on the ground. “You better hope not.” He glowered at Snake, still harboring some ill-feeling even though he knew it wasn’t the hybrid’s fault.
He turned and walked towards Ottoline to see if she was alive.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Krenna
“Relax, nitwit,” Krenna said. “Whatever weird world your from, we’re not on it.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Krenna
“Isn’t that the best time to panic?” Krenna asked, looking at the man by the window. “And so what we’re above ground? It isn’t too cold.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Izre
Izre didn’t particularly like the idea of blindly following the orders of a disembodied voice, but she didn’t know what else to do, so she trailed after the group. If things went bad, she could just dismember anyone who stood in her way.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
No, I was just mentioning it, you’re good!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Glace was already going in the right direction.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
Krenna
“Did I say that?” hissed Krenna. “Next time I’ll just keep it to myself! And you can all spend hours looking!”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 12 months ago
I’ll get this plot rolling.
The King
Suddenly, a loud voice filled the hall, emanating from nowhere in particular.
“Guests, make your way to the grand dining hall. You should be able to find your way there. All will be explained in due time.”
The voice ceased, leaving everything quiet.
Krenna
“Well, that was weird,” Krenna commented.…[Read more]
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