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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
One of the tricky things for this story is how do I get people to eat these? Who’s going to just try to consume one of them and hope it does something? To make it worse, at least three characters are going to figure it out independently.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
The most important thing that I noticed that definitely should be addressed is: how do you stop people from creating infinite Resonance Crystal factories? Couldn’t someone generate a piece of crystal, break it off, and someone else consume it, or do they degenerate INSTANTLY (which would be a bit weird)?
You need the c…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I forgot about your previous post 🤦♀️
No problem!
I don’t remember exactly how it worked previously but I like how the updated version works.
The previous version was fairly similar. The new one is a bit more symmetrical. It has twice as many categories of powers (material, mental, etc.) but one less effect (I got rid of d…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Magic Systems!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom
I just made some significant changes to Crystal Binding. I used to have it organized like this: three types of powers: energetic, physical, and spiritual; and four effects: combination, separation, absorption/infusion, and distortion.
There are now six types of powers, but only three effects.
The types are…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery posted a new activity comment 2 years, 4 months ago
A real-time week? That would be interesting, but I’m not sure how well it would work well. What might be better is to have some sort of in-universe end. For example, the character party RP theoretically will end eventually. We could have something like that but with a shorter goal. That could be fun, although I personally like RPs that last a l…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Did you say before that she always has right eyes, no matter what shape she is using?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
And is Jeptune?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Wait, is the Shadow participating in this attack?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Actually, I think the villains would totally lose anyway. There’s only a few of them, and a lot of the heroes are very powerful. That can still happen though.
Zash
“They’re referring to one of our targets, general,” said Zash. “The red-eyed one.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Also, note that the time bubbles were relevant to this RP.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Those three were separate from the main group I believe.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Zash
“You’re unbearable!” Zas spat. “I could kill him if I wanted to, but I don’t care. Kill him yourself if you wish. Are we ready to move then?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Are you referring to Dlek? He’s been here the whole time. He’s not a soldier—he’s from a post apocalyptic wasteland planet.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I realize Fennin has magic, but he hasn’t used it. Zash was basically just using the General’s logic against him.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Zash
“The prince is a weakling, so we pick off the ones who can protect him first!” said Zash. “As for your offer, I couldn’t care less. I. Am. Not. Yours. To. Command! I will do as I wish.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
We won’t get there.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@keilah-h
There can be a dragon here! -
Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
I could keep arguing, but I think we’re both on the same page here, and we’re completely off topic, so I’m gonna stop.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
All insects can fly
All birds are insects
therefore all birds can fly
You came to a true conclusion using one true premise and one false. That’s weird. Wait a minute none if those statements are true!
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Yeah, that’s what we were thinking.
I like longer RPs, too.