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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@rae @highscribeofaetherium @loopylin
Riina“Now that was uncalled for!” Riina said indignantly. “I was talking to this crank!” She jabbed her thumb towards the guy who had come nosing around. “If you’re all gonna be like that, I’m outta here!” She opened a portal beneath her and vanished in the blink of an eye.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Riina was talking to Mr. Gregory, not Junior.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@loopylin @rae @highscribeofaetherium
Riina
“Don’t even try it, pal,” Riina told the man. “You can’t catch me and I don’t think you want this to get messy.”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Riina
“Wow, this all sounds very illegal!” she said. “You kill your own victims? What are you then, some sort of hitman?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@highscribeofaetheriun
Sure!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Riina
“Now what do you suppose we’re supposed to do?” said Riina, putting her hands on her hips and looking around.
“You’re the one who wanted to come here,” said Vlydia. “This is dance practice, so I suppose we’re supposed to dance.”
“Yeah, well no one’s telling us what to do, so I figure we just wait until the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Okay! I still haven’t continued us yet, so nothing is happening anyway.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Alright, I’m gonna add another character with Vlydia.
Riina
Riina (Pronounced “Ree-een-a”) Riina is a friend of Vlydia, but they are very unalike. Riina is casual and a bit mischievous. She considers basically everything Vlydia does “boring.” She uses a different type of crystal, which are light blue. They are the same as Vlydia’s except that…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
What language invented such a ridiculous spelling?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 11 months ago
Ohhh… that all makes sense. I was wondering if there was a biblical underpinning to this, with the name Jesse.
To me it wasn’t clear that he had been gone. Maybe I just missed that detail. If you make sure that’s clear, then I think it works.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
It’s also funny how restrictive they are on shoes. I mean what shoes are allowed? lol.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Critiques for a short story I wrote? in the forum Short Story Critiques 11 months ago
That’s better. There are still a few questions I have. Why was the king completely unaware of what was going on, but then able to easily fix it? What does he usually do that he was unaware of these problems? Why did he happen to talk to Mason? Those are the main ones. The story is a lot clearer overall.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I can see that you did. …that’s a first…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Okay. Weird. A razor knife isn’t a particularly dangerous weapon. I just thought it was funny that the school is allowing literally any weapon that isn’t a firearm, but not things like paper. Irl, schools tend to be super restrictive about weapons.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
What’s a menthol?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
But she doesn’t need to go to the practice of course. I could add some new characters and maybe they could meet in the school halls, if you want. Or she could meet @highscribeofaetherim ‘s character, whoever that will be.
I also might add a second character, although I’m not sure who it would be. I haven’t RPd as Vlydia before, but I’m…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Vlydia probably would be carrying pens, papers, and books, which gives her more reason to not want to go.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Lol. That’s an odd assortment of contrabands. Paper isn’t allowed, but non-gun weapons are.
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