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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Ildin Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 2 weeks ago
@everyone
Riina has been shortened to Rina, because apparently the first name is already used. 🤦♂️
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
@everyone
I just discovered that Riina’s name is used in an existing piece of fiction, so I have removed one of the ‘i’s. Just FYI.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Free-for-all.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help with a title? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
I usually can name chapters fairly easily, and I like coming up with cool names, but I haven’t named any of my WIPs. Maybe it will be easier once they’re complete.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help with a title? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
I think I misunderstood your question a bit.
So like I said, if it is supplying electricity faster than they know what do with it, that would make it cheeper. In this scenario, you could have it overload the power stations and destroy it that way.
It would also work to have there be too much demand, but it seems like that’s u…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help with a title? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
The demand wouldn’t increase because there was more. Electricity would become cheeper, because there’s more of it. You could have it so that all the power overloads the plants and destroys them that way instead maybe. Idk.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Help with a title? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
That sounds really cool!
One question, how does the moon providing electricity faster than it can be used cause a power shortage?
Unfortunately, I’m really bad with titles. None of my stories have names yet. So I won’t be much help, sorry?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
Btw, it’s your turn (meaning you’ve RPed least recently–I don’t think we’re adhering to a strict turn order) in the Alpha/Twitch/Dalton group, if you weren’t aware.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
On the topics of signatures, yours is from Tron, I believe. Right?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 2 weeks ago
True, a real black hole acts that way, but think of a synthetic weaponized miniature black hole. I still don’t understand exactly how it works (I zoned out as Cgecko was explaining it) but I do know that the idea was a black hole that could kill an individual and then be put back in the container the user has for it.
In a sci-fi universe you…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Funnily enough, I do have a character that would be immune a black hole. Nedan. Nedan is able to absorb energy, which includes gravitational energy. If he starts absorbing his own gravitational energy, he becomes weightless, so a black hole couldn’t suck him in. I’m not sure if black holes are hot or not, but Nedan can also absorb heat, whi…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Black hole: a star so dense and massive that even light cannot escape its gravitational pull. Any object within its event horizon would experience such different levels of gravitation that it would be stretched until it was an atom thick, all while it plummets towards an enormous star.
So, yeah, Izre wouldn’t survive a black hole, but if…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I don’t know what “microtech” is, (unless it’s the same as nanotech) but Izre is immune to “highly skilled warriors who are the sons of warlords and emperors,” just as much as she is to anyone else, and she is next to invincible, for four primary reasons:
- She is for one thing, incredibly strong, fast, and agile, so even aside from durabi…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Btw, I think the way we’re doing it, the ghosts can appear to only their target without anyone else seeing them, but they still could appear to other people if they wanted to. In this case, it probably doesn’t matter, though.
Dalton’s ghost will probably only appear to him, at least for now. If it appears to other people, I’ll…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Okay. This RP has kind of been stalled for a while. I’ll try to get it up and running soon, but it might be a week or so yet.
We’re waiting for the king that pulled these characters in to tell them what they’re supposed to do, but I haven’t had time to think about it. I’ll be out of town this weekend, but maybe I can do it…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
*keeps facepalming*
😣 <- this face shows the constant torment she inflicts on me.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Oh, I was just randomly thinking about this, but do you think Captain Marvel is prideful? I haven’t wat,he’d her movie yet, but from what I’ve seen in Endgame, especially the line “You didn’t have me then” Makes me kinda despise her. Granted, she is more powerful, and therefore has some right to say things like that, but the tone lacked humb…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Lost in a haunted mansion AU Roleplay in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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