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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago

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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Wait, did that sword just try to get Zahlin killed?!?!?!
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Oh! Nahim could get Nora’s ring, since that is magical and make swords that can be controlled by it. They wouldn’t be sentient or rational, but they would half wield themselves, making it easier for the newcomers. Good or bad?
It doesn’t effect my characters, so I don’t care. It might go well with what I just said.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
It might make sense that characters with less skill would be given them to compensate, so if @trailblazer, @acancello, and/or @esther-c want crystal swords for their characters, that would work.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Okay. But I think he should only make the crystal swords if there are people who specifically want their character to get one. Mine won’t, because they’re swords are already about as good.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, lack of gunpowder would make guns impossible, and the crystals for those swords are supposed to be rare, and probably wouldn’t exist in Lillen at all.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Personally I’d rather the don’t make any of those, because they would totally make other weapons obsolete. I’d rather not write Ellis and Kate wielding guns, lol.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@rar
But if he makes those than why would any of the characters use other weapons?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
That’s never happened to me, but I’ve seen a lot of people mention that happening. Copying it first seems like a good safeguard, but you’ll have to reapply an italics/bold.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yes, he has human-like weapons, and advanced ones at that. Pistols, shotguns, grenades, the like. He can also freeze his enemies with icebreath or whip them with the six sharp spikes on the end of his tail. Or punch them.
Yep, that’s a very different fighting style. Does he use older weapons like swords or spears? I doubt the L…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Blade's Will in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
Nice! Would this actually count as a full short story? I couldn’t detect any full plot, but maybe it’s there. One piece of advice my writing teacher gave us for our short story assignment was ‘make sure you write a short story and not just a scene.’ Putting aside whether it counts as a short story, it’s a really good snapshot/…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
That is true. Your point?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Oh boy!
*gets popcorn*
Btw, Hugo and Hedieh are also in this scene. They’re helping.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Ellis, Ottoline, Snake, and Kaine need to start training the Lillenings. This should be interesting… Ellis is probably the only one trained in traditional combat. Ottoline can only use a bow, Kaine I don’t think is trained at all, and Snake probably doesn’t use any sort of normal combat style, right? Does he even use weapons?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, I don’t think we have anything else to do here, so we can skip to their various tasks.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Just so you know, Min dropped out of this RP for now. Kaine is still in here, because Min might come back eventually. We put Snake with Kaine because you hadn’t been on much. Sorry your character got paired with the one that is basically inactive, but Snake will also get to work with Ellis and Ottoline, since all four of them are w…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Sure, lol. That would be pretty epic.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@sacannah_grace2009
Bye! I have to go too.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
Krenna stared blankly at Fracture, “…when they’re–what? Rocks aren’t ever intimidating! Didn’t you get that I was insulting you?”
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
Turned to face the weak looking man behind her. “Let me get this straight,” she said, “your name is ‘Compound Fracture’? And you think you’re intimidating? I’ve seen rocks more intimidating than you.”
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