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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
It hasn’t happened yet.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Ellis
Seeing that Ottoline had already readied a target to practice with her bow, Ellis decided to have everyone work on that first. “Do you know how to use a bow, Snake?” he asked, as he selected one for himself and another for the hybrid. Kaine had already begun practicing with his.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Krenna
“How could I not be intimidating you?” whined Fracture, “Do you not tremble at my voice? Do my words not strike fear into your very bones?”
Krenna stared at him silently. “No,” she said finally, and turned around again.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Who do think would win a duel to the death, Zahlin or Nahim?
I have no idea either. I don’t know how good Zahlin is–we haven’t seen him fighting too much. But in both cases, he was basically only forced to surrender by someone else while he had one attacker pinned. Nahim obviously has better equipment and is really skilled. Zahlin definitely…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Do you want me to get Fennin to come in and stop them when they are about to kill each other?
You could also let Hugo or Hedieh intervene if there’s a weapon left lying around for them. Otherwise, yeah, I would think Fennin is somewhere nearby. He knows perfectly well that these two don’t get along, so he probably isn’t going to just let them…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I have to go too!
Here’s the start of the other two character groups:
Ellis
Before long, Ellis found himself in a courtyard with Ottoline, Kaine, and Snake, before a group of waiting Lillenings.
“So they want us to teach these people how to fight?” Ellis whispered to the others, scratching his head, “I mean, I know how to use a sword and a b…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
You’re such monsters lol! Jk
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Btw, @highscribe mentioned that spears don’t count for Zahlin.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Hmm… he has some issues there. I don’t know why Zahlin would just randomly say something like that though.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic The Blade's Will in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
I regard it as a complete concept, because it has a rounded and closed off structure, so adding anything else would be jarring, and I simply had a goal of explaining the concept well, and maintaining intrigue, so I put it up as a short story because it has a narrative structure that presents my concept, although said narrative…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I have an RP written for Ellis and the training team, but I’ll wait till the end of the night before posting it, since none of the other people involved seem to be on.
I can also write one for Kate as the scouting team starts working.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Probably Zahlin saying something mean, or refusing to touch sharpened objects.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Things should get more interesting once they have to deal with weapons that are sharp…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Okay, so we’re going with: Magic is translating their words so that they understand each other, but that they still write in their own language? I think I like that best.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Did I just spell ‘said’ backwards?????
Lol, I was wondering what that word was. (I guess ‘dais’ is a word.) You didn’t spell it backwards. You switched s and d.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Are we also saying they would all be able to write in English? Canonically, Ellis and Kate would not speak English, but I’m okay with doing that through magic shenanigans. On the other hand, it might be interesting if they write in their own language.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Magic can probably translate into one language. Reading… I don’t think that will work 😅
That’s what I was thinking. Boy, Kate, Nora, Kari, and Amir are going to find that annoying, assuming they’ll have to write things down.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Wait…how do the characters understand what each other say, let alone read? Wouldn’t they all speak different languages???
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Lol, yeah it’s impressive they’ve lasted this long! Hold on for me to write an RP…
Yeah, Nahim could have just told Zahlin to put it all in.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
How come it seems like I’m the only one who doesn’t have any family who writes????
You’re not. @savannah_grace2009 for example.
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