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Elizabeth replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Okay. Would you mind putting this into a google doc then sending it to me? It’ll be easier for me to make suggestions there, unless you’d rather do it here. And they will be suggestions, ’cause I’m no poetry expert. Though I do enjoy making the words fit.
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 More for metric pattern, but either one.
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Daniel DeGraaf replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
This is awesome, that you for your work.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Did you write this to a specific metric pattern? Or are you just looking to clean up the phrasing a bit? I’m afraid I can’t help if it’s set to a specific pattern, but I can help if you just want to polish it up a bit.
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EpicAddie2 replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel *dies laughing* We need to figure out a caption for the last one of Josiah!
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Daeus started the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Hi KeePers,
Any of you who write structured poetry, I could use a bit of help with a poem I’ve written. This is for the fantasy novel I’m writing and essentially recounts the first events of the world.
My problem is that I know a few spots have clunky meter. I generally have a good ear for meter and maybe I could fix this by myself, but…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Unlikable Protagonist? in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@introvert_girl Sam really said it already, but you can also add a backstory to show why the character acts the way they do. The overall tone of the story will help too. I think though that the most important thing is proactivity, like Sam said.
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Snapper changed their profile picture 8 years, 7 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99Â KP-versary! Congrats!
Many hugs to my fellow Whovian 😉
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Joy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 7 months ago
@catwing I could always use more advice 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@sam-kowal *is honored that you think me a hero in dragondom*
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
To Stan: No, I’m still a dragon. I can still melt chairs. This is just the human me. Worry not, Stan. We’re still dragon friends. *offers you a melted chair*
To Sam: 😛 (XD Still a dragon. Once a dragon, always a dragon.) I wrote 1144, so I’m signing out now. 🙂 Good luck on your new book!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@sam-kowal *nods* XD
Turns to Stan: Why aren’t you talking to Sam? I thought you two were best buds?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@sam-kowal *hands Stan cough medicine* Why, what’s wrong with him?
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy @dekreel @hope @anyone else… Just letting you guys know that I change my name and profile picture, so if you can’t find Dragon Snapper, that’s where I am. XD 😛
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@dragon-snapper
Whoa. Mixed emotions. This is different5% of me is going: “Cool!”
Another 5% of me: “OMIWORD I KNOW HER NAME!”90% of me: “NoOoOoOoOO, I liked your dragon self! CHANGE BACK!!” *starts crying*
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XD I’m keeping my name up, but you two win. I’m a dragon again. 😛 @sam-kowal @dekreel (I think I like it better too. LOL) I can’t change my profile picture without a revolt, can I?
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I actually did not mean to sound that heartbroken XD I was moody when I wrote that. But fair enough XD
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@dekreel XD Don’t worry about it. On here, I’m a dragon. It must stay that way forever. AND EVER!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@sam-kowal Sweet! 😀 I should be on for another 20 minutes or so…
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Snapper changed their profile picture 8 years, 7 months ago
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Skredder replied to the topic Unlikable Protagonist? in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@introvert_girl It really depends on the individual character for me. I’ve read some stories where I didn’t like the protagonist in the beginning, but they did grow and felt true remorse over what they did and tried to fix it. Those I liked. There were other books where I didn’t like the protagonist in the beginning and I never finished the book…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
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Alia replied to the topic One of my MCs is a MK in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine, yeah, it still didnt work. I am mentally screaming right now. but I have to do some school so I’ll have to write it again later
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