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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

@Jess praying lots!
He designed the machine they’re using for his surgery?!
Hannah replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

@jess @winter-rose @overcomer @dragon-snapper @bluejay @kate-flournoy @anybody, really

I’m back for a bit! If anyone is up for some writing/editing, I’ll be here for a tinge. 🙂

(Also, @dragon-snapper I celebrate Christmas with a good bit of that- presents {sassy AND sweet for my family and friends, if I can pull it off}, feasts, lights, tree,…[Read more]
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago

@Daeus yes. Much better. I agree with @Jess that that sentence still seems to be having trouble— perhaps because all subjects of that sentence are not necessarily in the same categorical thought-family, if you know what I mean?— but otherwise I love it.
Daeus replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago

Ok, @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @dragon-snapper @ingrid @hope @jess @mark-kamibaya @his-instrument @anyone-else

Here’s take three. Tell me what you think.

Matthew is sworn to avenge a murder. His dedication to his wronged family is powerful enough to bring him through any trial, but his youth and inexperience hold him back. Setting out to find…[Read more]
BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

@jess I didn’t see this til now, I’m glad things are going okay.
Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

@Jess Praise!! So glad that all is well. 🙂 Merry Christmas Eve!!
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

Whew @Jess. 🙂
Ethryndal replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

@jess Oh, I wish I had seen that earlier, I would have prayed. Praise the Lord it’s nothing serious! I’ll keep praying.
Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

@jess Praise the Lord! I’ll still be praying that all continues well. Merry Christmas Eve!
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

@Jess It’s okay, I’ll respond since I’m already here. 🙂

I’ll be praying, and I hope everything goes well.
BlueJay posted a new activity comment 7 years, 11 months ago

I’m glad things are looking good for your Dad @jess Keep us posted won’t you? 🙂

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- Jess replied 7 years, 11 months ago
  
  Will do. Thanks for praying 🙂
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

I’m writing if anyone is interested. @jess @perfectfifths @anyone else who is awake
Emma Flournoy posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago

@Jess Has your dad found a job yet?
- Jess replied 7 years, 11 months ago
  
  Thanks for asking! He hasn’t found a job yet, but he had an interview with a company that sounds promising. He also got an awesome severance package which was unexpected. 🙂 Please continue keep us in your prayers! 🙂
  - Emma Flournoy replied 7 years, 11 months ago
    
    I will! 🙂
    What’s a severance package? By the name I’d guess it’s some consolation you get for being fired? I’ve never heard of something like that, but that’s what it sounds like…
    - Jess replied 7 years, 11 months ago
      
      Yes, basically. He gets paid and benefits and stuff, and it was longer than he was expecting.
      
      BlueJay replied 7 years, 11 months ago
      
      I’m glad things are looking good for your Dad @jess Keep us posted won’t you? 🙂
      
      Jess replied 7 years, 11 months ago
      
      Will do. Thanks for praying 🙂
      
      Emma Flournoy replied 7 years, 11 months ago
      
      Huh. That’s kinda nice.
Snapper started the topic Catching Trout in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

This has nothing to do with catching trout. No, but it has to do with our hook. The first sentence, page, paragraph, chapter.
I’ve lost he fine art of coming up with a good hook, so, if you all have any tips, that would be most appreciated. In addition, if you have a book that has a great hook/starter sentence, then I would be glad to see those…[Read more]
Snapper started the topic Catching Trout in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

This has nothing to do with catching trout. No, but it has to do with our hook. The first sentence, page, paragraph, chapter.
I’ve lost he fine art of coming up with a good hook, so, if you all have any tips, that would be most appreciated. In addition, if you have a book that has a great hook/starter sentence, then I would be glad to see those…[Read more]
Snapper started the topic in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago

This has nothing to do with catching trout. No, but it has to do with our hook. The first sentence, page, paragraph, chapter.
I’ve lost he fine art of coming up with a good hook, so, if you all have any tips, that would be most appreciated. In addition, if you have a book that has a great hook/starter sentence, then I would be glad to see those…[Read more]
Daeus replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago

Alright. Hopefully we’re good now. Can you find any way to improve it? Does it attract you? (why or why not?)

@leumeister @emma-flournoy @hope @kate-flournoy @perfectfifths @faithdk @jess @his-instrument @writefury @gretald @ingridrd @sarah-h @the-bean @mark-kamibaya @warrioroftherealm @hannah-c @ivy-rose @ethryndal @dragon-snapper @anne-swiftbla…[Read more]
Daeus started the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago

Alright, folks. So I need your sharpest analytical minds here. You see, I kinda need a finished synopsis today so I threw one together last night and would appreciate your best criticism on it. If you ever feel at any point in the synopsis that it has dipped in interest, that it sounds jerky, or that there could be better wording, please let me…[Read more]
Daeus started the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago

Alright, folks. So I need your sharpest analytical minds here. You see, I kinda need a finished synopsis today so I threw one together last night and would appreciate your best criticism on it. If you ever feel at any point in the synopsis that it has dipped in interest, that it sounds jerky, or that there could be better wording, please let me…[Read more]
Daeus started the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago

Alright, folks. So I need your sharpest analytical minds here. You see, I kinda need a finished synopsis today so I threw one together last night and would appreciate your best criticism on it. If you ever feel at any point in the synopsis that it has dipped in interest, that it sounds jerky, or that there could be better wording, please let me…[Read more]
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