@jess
Active 2 years, 9 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Snapper started the topic in the forum Characters 7 years, 7 months ago
*holds up Monopoly card* It says, ‘collect two cents from each of the players.’
So, I’ve had this little problem for maybe a year now. It worked okay for first person, but now that its third person, its gets trickier. The little problem in question, perhaps not as little as that, is favoritism.
Generally speaking, I have two main characters. The…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 7 years, 7 months ago
*holds up Monopoly card* It says, ‘collect two cents from each of the players.’
So, I’ve had this little problem for maybe a year now. It worked okay for first person, but now that its third person, its gets trickier. The little problem in question, perhaps not as little as that, is favoritism.
Generally speaking, I have two main characters. The…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 7 years, 7 months ago
*holds up Monopoly card* It says, ‘collect two cents from each of the players.’
So, I’ve had this little problem for maybe a year now. It worked okay for first person, but now that its third person, its gets trickier. The little problem in question, perhaps not as little as that, it favoritism.
Generally speaking, I have two main characters. The…[Read more] -
Kina Lamb replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@jess I meant 891 words, not days. 😀 haha!
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@jess I’m just signing off. I got 891 days, and the first 20 days covered! 😀 Yay!
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@jess hey, good job! I am really pleased with myself right now. I just finished the first two days of the story. 😀 😀 😀 😀 And I’m still writing!
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FeedingMyGoldfish replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 7 months ago
@audrey-caylin @theliterarycrusader Yes, I currently have just the imaginary goldfish. I was going to get a goldfish last week, but then I accidentally found guinea pigs for adoption. Actually, I’m not exactly sure how I ended up getting guinea pigs at this particular time. I had been researching them and then…it kind of just happened that…[Read more]
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Cloudy started the topic Short Story Idea (May turn into Novella) in the forum 7 years, 7 months ago
So I took a 6-day intensive on taming of the shrew. It ha quickly became my favorite Shakespeare play. So I wrote this blurb that would probably be stuck in the middle of the story somewhere:
The knight ride to the mouth of the cave. The afternoon light fell on him, dappled through the trees. The cave for which he had been seeking for o long…[Read more]
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Cloudy replied to the topic Phoenix Tears – Please Critique. in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
I know I need to fix the narration. That’s why it’s in here! Thanks for the input! I’m glad you liked the ending. @jess
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic The Antihero in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
Well, it’s been about a week. And I don’t think anyone else will read the article so . . .
@daeus Thanks, man. How antiheroes were treated in the past is probably a little more speculative than most of my findings (I’m not that old, right). I just found that the popular figures in Greco-Roman mythology were classical heroes (Hercules, Achilles,…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Finished! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@theliterarycrusader Interesting request. I shall be done, my liege. On the point of confetti, I already have a name for the farm: KeePer Confetti Farms.
@jess I like the disappearing thing. Maybe that’s how Josiah disappears and appears so quickly.
@hope Haha! @michael-stanton If you read the previous story which this entire thread is about,…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@theliterarycrusader Interesting request. I shall be done, my liege. On the point of confetti, I already have a name for the farm: KeePer Confetti Farms.
@jess I like the disappearing thing. Maybe that’s how Josiah disappears and appears so quickly.
@hope Haha! @michael-stanton If you read the previous story which this entire story is about,…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@daeus @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @jess @jane-maree @graciegirl @ethryndal @audrey-caylin I will now proceed to write.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @graciegirl @dragon-snapper @jess @jane-maree I’ll be writing for an hour.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Aha. Would like some more ice cream long with the sequel? 😛
@christi-eaton Hahaha! Yeah…I’m not even sure why I asked that question. 😛 Shall I say its unanimous?Okay, as there will be an angry mob chasing me if I do not write a sequel, as it would seem, I clearly need to write one. I already have some ideas, but if any of you have…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@audrey-caylin @jess @that_writer_girl_99 I’m signing off as well. I wrote 1206 words , which is more than I’ve written in MONTHS. I am so happy! Thank you for the company! And Jess, that’s great! Good luck to the rest of you!
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@jess *facepalm* Sorry I didn’t realize you were on! Congrats on those words! 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@jess *bows* And I had ice cream.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@jess @daeus @jane-maree The foe has been vanquished. The kitchen is clean.
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