Jess

His retina was not detaching 😀 , and it doesn’t look to serious, but he’ll be back for pictures next week. Thank you all for praying!
@winter-rose, @emma-flournoy

Well, here I am again… My dad has always had eye problems, and he’s seeing a black spot that comes and goes. The last time he saw something like this, his retina was starting to detach. He has to go to the ER today for them to check it out. Hopefully it’s nothing serious, but who knows.
I’ll tag some people, @clairec, @spradlin, @kate-flourn…[Read more]

@Northerner,

certifiably insane

Yep. I think we’ll get along just fine. Glad you finally got around to joining! 🙂 I stalked for a long time myself…
Do you have any favorite books, movies, plays, or other forms of literature?
Anyway, welcome to bestitest place on the interweb. 😀

I like it. One thing, in here, “Discovering a historic treasure, Mathew returns…” I’m not quite sure what discovering a historic treasure has to do with Matthew returning to wreak vengeance and take on the character of Edwin. Otherwise, it attracts me and I would probably want to read it if I saw this in a book store.

@Daeus, sorry I didn’t get around to the first version, but the second one is better. 😉

Setting out to find new strength, he plummets into struggles for survival, desperate plots, uncertainties, and the vague shadow surrounding his destiny from a dying mentor’s vision.

I agree with Kate, the “into struggles” part is a bit weird. Otherwise, I l…[Read more]

@perfectfifths, I have a rather large and crazy dog, but he doesn’t interfere with my typing. XD I’m signing off too because, as previously mentioned, it’s 11:30 here. Enjoy lunch! 😛

@perfectfifths, @ethryndal, @hannah-c, You have no idea how much you are making me laugh right now… 😛 (Ok, I just admitted that I was ghosting, so sorry…) 🙂

@Dragon-snapper Awesome!

@Dragon-snapper, Okay, I have to leave now. I wrote a couple hundred words and beta-read a good chunk, so I’m happy. 😀 How goes it for you?

@Dragon-snapper, I’ll be beta-reading/writing for about 45 minutes or so 🙂

@Anne-of-lothlorien,
I like it. I would change the first sentence, but I like the rest of the paragraph. Ideas… erm…
I’ve always fancied being able to enter a character’s world, but that was kind of done in Storybound. I like the idea of characters coming into our world, since that isn’t done very often. Or, we’re the ones in stories, and…[Read more]

I prefer first person just because I’m more comfortable with it. I get really into my character’s heads with it. (Which has made for some interesting occasions… If someone interrupts me while I’m writing 1st person, I sometimes answer like my character!) However, third person can be more practical to write. My current WIP is in third person…[Read more]

I prefer first person just because I’m more comfortable with it. I get really into my character’s heads with it. (Which has made for some interesting occasions… If someone interrupts me while I’m writing 1st person, I sometimes answer like my character!) However, third person can be more practical to write. My current WIP in in third person…[Read more]

@clairec, @spradlin, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @anne-of-lothlorien, @sarah-h, @rolena-hatfield, @ethryndal, Thank you all for praying!!! Sad news: my dad was laid off today. 🙁 He gets a package for a few months though. Please continue to pray for a new job and soon! He has an interview with another company that might work out next week.…[Read more]

@clairec, @spradlin, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @anne-of-lothlorien, @sarah-h, @rolena-hatfield, @ethyndal, Thank you all for praying!!! Sad news: my dad was laid off today. 🙁 He gets a package for a few months though. Please continue to pray for a new job and soon! He has an interview with another company that might work out next week.…[Read more]

@Anne-of-Lothlorien, I have a blog! 😀 It’s theartfulauthor.wordpress.com