Jess

@dragon-snapper & @winter-rose I can join you for about half an hour or so 🙂

@Ethryndal That’s awesome! (And we’re enjoying the snowstorm down in the Carolinas, or at least some of us are!) 😛

Freedom Rider? The Rogue Knight? Or maybe there is a legend of some hero who saves people, and they start calling Rodyn the legendary hero’s name? @ethryndal

@his-instrument I received the email 🙂

@dragon-snapper
A time traveler who’s powers go haywire at random times a put him in random places. (or maybe it’s not random)

Write about why a giraffe is tied to your kitchen table right now.

A girl that knows everything in the world.

@his-instrument, Okay, sounds great 🙂 I will definitely be able to finish by March. My email is 143 artsy gal at gmail.com (Of course, with no spaces and a @ sign. internet precaution)

@his-instrument. I would love to beta-read that! I can do things in word or google docs, but I prefer word docs. It will probably take me a few weeks to do because life. Do you have a time frame?

@gideon-sowdon First person in multiple POVs can be hard to do, but I love it. (I write in first person most of the time.) Like @his-instrument said, you need to make it really clear who is speaking. Names before chapters and references to the other narrator can really help the reader track. I personally find it difficult to have more than two…[Read more]

@Hope, I’m terrible with acronyms (sorry,) but I looove your idea!

Hiya. Nice to meet you! 🙂 I’m Jess, or at this moment, the person who always seems to be late to these things, no matter how long she’s on KP. 😛

My other hobbies are… wait. I have no other hobbies. *shrugs* I like school? That might sound weird but I’m homeschooled and I think that explains it.

I love that! I write, sketch, and do sch…[Read more]

*yawns from staying up too late* Happy New Year to everyone out there! 🙂

@winter-rose WOW! Great Job! I wanted to finish my own today, but seeing how I have at least another 15,000 words until I’m satisfied, I don’t think that’ll be possible. So kudos to you for actually finishing so soon after NaNoWriMo!!! 🙂

I’m still here @Daeus. I’ll probably go for another hour, but we’ll see.

@Daeus, pretty good.
I wrote 1,400 words, so I’m really pleased. I’m going to continue for at least another hour. @aella, @winter-rose

@Emma-Flournoy, Yeah, he helped, so he knows that the machine is good! 😛

@aella @winter-rose @daeus, I’ll join you. 🙂

@Ethryndal, I didn’t see this until now, but I’ll definitely pray.

Quick Update: My dad’s appointment was rescheduled to today, and they found out that his retina was detaching. 🙁 He’s is going to have surgery today (it lasts about 4ish hours). Praise God that this happened before January first, as insurance should cover the costs! He…[Read more]

I like it. 🙂 The sentence:

Setting out to find new strength, he plummets into tangled plots, tragedies, and the deep puzzle of his destiny put in question by a cryptic vision.

It seems a little wordy still, but otherwise I like it. I agree with dragon snapper that you do tend to use “his” a lot, but it didn’t bother me.

@Daeus

I know it’s Christmas time, but is anyone writing? 🙂 @bluejay, @dragon-snapper, @winter-rose, @aella, @overcomer, @anyone else who’s around

@I-J-Anderson, I don’t go crazy if there are illustrations in a book, but I would rather have a book with no illustrations. Illustrations can be good, but I as the reader would rather fill in the blanks on what the characters look like myself. Also, like Emma Flournoy said, if the book is well written there won’t be clunky descriptions. 😉 It’s…[Read more]