J.A. Penrose

@jess-penrose That works!

@jess-penrose Yes–that looks great! Depending on the plot/genre of your story, it may be interesting to also have an answer that you can lose your right to freedom if it’s for the greater good of society. (I’m thinking of times of crisis where citizens or soldiers may be coerced to do things because otherwise the nation may be overrun.) That sort…[Read more]

@jess-penrose It could… Drawing from your first answer, what about adjusting the focusing question to something like, “When can you lose your right to freedom?” and tweaking the alternate answers slightly. Approaching it from that angle doesn’t make the right answer seem quite as obvious (since you have criminals who break the law and…[Read more]

@jess-penrose Hmm… I like the idea, but my concern is that the message is too obvious. When I first read the focusing question, the answer of “everyone” is the first answer that sprung to my mind, and generally speaking you want to avoid focusing questions that have obvious answers. I think there’s the potential with some alternate answers,…[Read more]

*Stares at sabre conversation* I don’t need a sabre. I have claws. *looks at sharp claws* *retracts them* Handy.
Now. Anyone have more cliches for me?
Kid cliches?
Fantasy cliches?
Christmas cliches?
Portal cliches?
Or anything fun that you think I could/should put in my Kapeefer Literature?
Also intresting facts about your character.
@epicaddie2…[Read more]

@jane-maree @jess-penrose @dekreel @shannon @emily @seekjustice @epicaddie2

I’m characterizing.

@jess-penrose I am here if you’re still writing ☺

@jess-penrose Oh right. I forgot you guys were in the future.

@shannon @jess-penrose @emily @dekreel

*peers into emptiness* Helloooo? Anyone writing…?

@jess-penrose Lunch? But it’s past dinner. *prepares time travelness suit* 😉

These are mechanical pencils.
( I claim no right to this picture)
(And forgive my Americanness, but what’s a pacer?)

@jess-penrose Wait, you guys have mechanical pencils in Australia, right?

@jess-penrose Never. I use mechanical pencils. Constantly sharp. Never blunt.

@jess-penrose Points are my specialty.

@jess-penrose I’m guessing because you replied that you’re alive. 😉

@winter-rose

@jess-penrose Ah. *facesmack* I meant ‘What about you two?’

@jess-penrose @winter-rose I’m alive now, but are two?

Signing off. I’ve finished  procrastinating I mean… writing… yeah… Writing. 😀

@jess-penrose *mind explodes*

@jane-maree @jess-penrose I actually have to sign out now.. *nooooo* But I wrote a nice chapter. 1245 words.

*save me some pizza Jane.*

@Jess-Penrose *waves* Heyo. 😛

@Dragon-snapper @Jess-Penrose I’m heeeeeeere. Brainstorming some stuff for edits.