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Catwing replied to the topic Three and Seven ~ Finding Secrets in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 7 months ago
First off, it is 52,789 words.
@dragon-snapper *laughs* You could consider your front feet for clapping? I understand. “My life is busy, but I still take time to ride my dragon.” (That should go on the inspiration board!)@beta-readers I don’t know a good dead line… How about as soon as you can? 😛 Early-ish November?
Beta-reading (at least my…[Read more]
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Catwing started the topic Three and Seven ~ Finding Secrets in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 7 months ago
Well, at long last I finished this edit of my book. And I was wondering if anyone wanted to beta read it. ( @daughteroftheking @aislinn-mollisong @seekjustice @perfectfifths @jess-penrose @jane-maree @dragon-snapper @epicaddie2 @his-instrument @emily [Tell your sister if you like…])
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose Yeah, some people can’t get an education.
It’s glitching a bit… But I finished! Tomorrow I outline! Good night. *happy to have finished this edit of her book!!!* -
Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose I actually like editing. XD Though writing is most certainly more fun.
Some school work is fun, some I’m indifferent about, Others I don’t like… *cough* math *cough*
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
Good idea. Maybe I should do that… At least some school for then. @jess-penrose It would free up writing time in November, so I could finish a whole novel. I’m going to write the sequel then. Yay! Then I’ll edit that one. And write the third book sometime after that. Then I can finally write my book that I am super excited about! With Kay…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose I edited one! (The suspense builds… I may have to start on the outline of the next book tonight too. I want to invent want happens next. 😛 ) Are you writing?
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose Thanks.
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Catwing replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@daughteroftheking oops…
@jess-penrose You are welcome. Potato squash? Okay… The funny thing is I like potatoes, but I don’t like squash. So how I came up with that I don’t know.
Randomness…
“People have forget the meaning of names… But their names are more powerful than they could know. Even shaping who they are…”“This is an open sky…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@allison-grace I don’t think there is another one. *hands you chocolate in the shape of feathers*
I call some other people so they can see this and comment too… @dragon-snapper @daugtheroftheking @epicaddie2 @emily @daeus @kate-flournoy @seekjustice @jess-penrose @xonos-darkgrate @jane-mareeInspiration… *sink into feathers and…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Finding Secrets~ To Uncover A Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@jess-penrose Yay! I’ll brainstorm some tomorrow. That would probably be a good idea. 😉
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @dragon-snapper @epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking
@aislinn-mollisong @seekjustice @perfectfifths @jane-maree @jess-penrose
Then the brave catwing spread open her silky black wings and took flight.
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Catwing replied to the topic Finding Secrets~ To Uncover A Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
Thanks everyone!
I worked on this when I wasn’t sleepy. ( 😛 )You Were Called By The King
Alex is not normal. She and her friends talk to animals.
But in the course of a few days the normal of their abnormal lives is shaken. They all receive a mysterious riddle from a cloaked messenger of a long dead tyrant king.One Crown, Three Parts
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Finding Secrets~ To Uncover A Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice @jess-penrose @jane-maree *feels really pleased my suggestions were so helpful* 😉 😛
@catwing Ultimately it’s up to you to decide. And based on all the versions I’ve read, each one giving a little more about the story than before, yet still keeping it a mystery, I’d love to read this book as well. 😀
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Catwing replied to the topic Finding Secrets~ To Uncover A Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@perfectfifths It was a coincidence.
@seekjustice @jess-penrose @daeus @emily Thanks all! Here’s two new versions…I wasn’t sure which way to go, so I’m trying both. (They are improving. Slowly.)
I’ll keep playing around with it, in the word pit. 😉
Which do you like better and what are your thoughts?You Were Called By The King
Alex and…[Read more]
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Catwing started the topic Finding Secrets~ To Uncover A Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
Hello! I am finishing up my book and was working on the synopsis… But I wanted some critiques.
(The first line will be centered)You Were Called By The King
Jack, Alex, Cele, John, Chase, and Amelia are not normal. Even before they met a mysterious messenger, who says they have to save Allore by finding three jewels and giving them to the…[Read more] -
Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@seekjustice @daughteroftheking @salome01w4g @dragon-snapper @winter-rose
@that_writer_girl_99 @epicaddie2 @shannon @emily @Jess-penrose
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@Jess-penrose Ha!! That would definitely contribute. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
@jess-penrose Ohh, sorry! It’s an expression, but the way I wrote it did look a little odd. 😛 If someone has a mind like a steel trap, it means it lets nothing out—steel traps contain everything they catch. Thus, a mind like a steel trap contains and keeps straight everything it catches. So your brother must have a mind like a steel trap. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
@Jess-Penrose Mind like a steel trap, eh? Whoa.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Synopsis Help in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
True, but all other movies rate far lower on the epic-scale. @jess-penrose
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